How to raise a villainess.

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"Bring him to his knees."

Wait, what? This was supposed to be my reward ceremony, hell, I had just seconds ago finally received the title they decided to push on me.

"Bring me the ring."

Alice De Vritara, crimson eyes that burned like fire as she looked down at him. He was so dumbfounded that he didn't even try to stop her as she forced his arm up and placed a ring in his hand. A silver band that twined around a large amethyst that held a deeply crimson core, the Eye of Rostam, expensive enough to buy half a city.

"Oh? Is this a proposal? I didn't know you wanted to marry me that much."

Wait, what? You're the one who forced me to hold the ring, hell, you're even the one who forced me to my knees like this. In this situation, shouldn't I be the one saying thigns like that?

"Don't look at me like that, I'm just following your third tenet."

Again, what? You're blaming this on me? What the hell, all I wanted to do was change your pre-determined fate and raise the supposed monster of the story into a good (Villainess) person.

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(I do not own the cover for this story, I will remove if asked. I also give myself permission to release this on other sites.)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: NuiProductions

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

panfamRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i knew what i was looking for when i saw the title, my hopes rose when the picture expanded and the synopsis drew me in like the fat little duck that i am. Very happy to report that through it all i found quite the pile of pees indeed sir, indeed. Though the first course has been served and my appitite wet my anticipation has me a near trembling for the meal to come. Looking forward to some very happy quaking to come.
Asra99Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Wanted to read a romance/SOL.Was skeptical of the title due to lots of similar others being hollow novels.But this one,what do i say, it's just perfect.My best novel on romance so far.I am a simple man.This level of understanding and communication between characters,a pinch of tragic love was all it needed to keep me engaged.Nui-san thank you for this wonderful experience!!
biggiraffe60Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is amazing. It not only has great action, but romance aswell. Both main characters are amazing and i can't wait to see as their relationship progresses. I recommend this novel to anyone who loves fantasy worlds with romance, as they will be very pleased. I am hooked on this story and can't wait for more
PeterDuckRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A interesting story of a isekai devoting his life towards raising and helping a "villaness".
However it is a deeper story and is getting more and mroe complicated as the arthor builds his world.
Grammar wise it is properly edited with scare is any mistakes.
I would seriously recommend this for those who want a darker and rougher isekai villaness story.
oneizmRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
When I started it seemed somewhat simple. I was worried that the whole knight thing would get cringy, but the characters display some of my favorite traits. Maturity. Faith in their partner. Intelligence. Most importantly, there have been no moments that could've been solved by a simple conversation.
The way the two main characters interact is fantastic. There's an us against the world mentality that make them a very strong pair. They get mad at each other sometimes. But there's never undue drama afterwards. They're growing more powerful and are intelligent about how and when they use it. But they also still feel like kids. In my opinion it's the perfect balance.
Outside of the main characters, the story itself surprised me as well. It didn't end up going where I thought it would and when the twist was revealed about some of the side characters, it really opened the gate to a fantastic story.
The grammar is good enough that I haven't noticed any issues, and the style it's written in pulls you in without leaving every chapter as a cliff hanger.
This is the type of book that has me looking for others that are similar. I hope it goes on for a long time.
QueenInRagsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's good. I'm not going to debate that. There are some strong artistic and linguistic chops behind this story. Characters are fleshed out. The world is also semi-fleshed out but mostly left at generic fantasy ( Think general Koren Webnovel level of fleshed out). There are some story elements at odds. I will admit that. But overall I very much enjoyed reading this.... a somewhat edge fest of a story.... but at the same time it dosent cross that line and remains enjoyable.
Overall the problem looks to be pacing. Pacing pacing pacing. Every single interaction and moment of every second is written out for the first twenty chapters. And although that works for some authors, it is always good to learn when to pull that veil of time back and forward to allow for character development off-page. Otherwise, like this story, where the body of a child is literally behaving like a superhero, you get some interesting occurrences.
BooksandpunsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Son of a GUN! This novel hits like a jackhammer, and is the best way possible! Terrible villains on everything side, enough foreshadowing to create intriguing theories but nothing solid, Its like Tori transmigrated setting got mixed in with deathworld commando backstory! I am in pain reading this, BUT WHAT A GOOD PAIN IT IS!
RazbiusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Review done at the end of Season 1
A second chance inside a series that you watched on TV? A future villainess that you can help? Righting wrongs?
This story has everything that it needs to hook the reader and carry it through an awesome journey.
Lets see what I mean by that
Grammar: Cannot find obvious mistakes or horrible sentences. It is written clearly and verbal forms are used like they should.
Style: Really nice. They author has a way of presenting information in a non-boring way and manages to make the reader involved in the situations that the characters in the novel encounter. The pace is just enough to not be too slow; neither too fast.
Characters: Maybe the less strong part of the novel. On one side they are well developed and their thinking and actions are in sync. Also, we have learned about their backstories and have seen some glimpses of their future, so we can sympathize and wish them success.
On the other side, Alice is too mature for a 7-year-old kid, despite all the difficulties she has suffered, and Gabriel, our other protagonist, has a too stable and centered mind that doesn't really goes with the event that causes him to be inside this new world.
If Alice age would be like 12 years and Gabriel entrance to this world would have been due to an accident or something similar I think the story should be much more beliable.
Story: Amazing spin about a setting (villainess redemption) that has been done many times before. The author manages to introduce new possibilities that clearly differentiates this story from others in the same genre, including spirits and word-based magic casting with elements.
In conclusion this story has everything that it needs to be a success in RR and in its category, specially with all the world, characters and settings that we will be discovering in the future.
S33K3RRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a very interesting story with a pretty unique take on the "reincarnation / isekai with a side of villainess" troupe. I'm frequently drawn into the characters and actually want to follow them along their journey together, wherever it may lead. Any grammatical errors are few and far between and the few I've seen so far have been purely by chance. The author is active in his community, communicates with his readers, and seems to take criticism well. I have very much enjoyed my experience here so far, and plan to continue doing so as we move forward!
pelyaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The MC's choice of straightening up the villainess is to give her more power, so she can overcome her childhood traumas with sheer power. Let's see how this plays out.
So far the characters are kids, the kid villainess does not behave like the villainess yet, but I'm not losing hope yet that she turns into a proper yandere. The MC is already pretty ruthless though, maybe some of his sociopathic behavior would rub on our villainess.