How I escaped being a hero
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
BURN AFTER READING THERE MUST BE NO EVIDENCE THIS GUIDE EXISTEDA story, A bibliography, A guide,About how I escaped my eneivetable death be it from man demons or gods also I guess I kidnapped the demon lord.Starts at the end fight with the main story being what comes after how ever their will be flash backs on how I made my escape
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Marcishere
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 55
- Views
- 12,483
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- harone09Royal Road★★★★ 3.5interesting story it could evolve in many direction but i hope the demon lord is a girl and the MC a guy and both are horny the rest is up to you and if it gets hot be descriptive try your best and goodluck
- RotaRoyal Road★ 0.5The story has so little content that you barely have anything to read.
What content it DOES have, is riddled with grammar flaws and awkward structure.
The story has a plot almost as flat as the screen you use to view this review.
The characters are shallow and one-dimensional. they don't even reach two-dimensional because you don't even get so much as a proper introduction to ANY of the cast, you want to know what they are supposed to look like? yup, not described, instead you get told in a "bonus" half-chapter to follow a series of links to Pinterest to see pictures of his inspiration.
Also, there is no progress or growth made either by the plot OR the author through the current chapters. All errors and problems have followed through from the prologue to the current chapter.
Want an example? My review alone has more full-stops or sentence closers than his entire story does, you instead get great big empty line spaces and open-ended sentences smashed into each other to try and fluff up the little content there is.