"How have we not been caught by now?" An Unofficial They are Smol story

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Description

Sometimes, you feel a little disrespected. Sometimes, you feel a little small compared to the rest of the world. For Marc Bryant, that feeling's more than just mental. He, and all the other humans, are physically smaller then others. What to do in this situation, when you want your voice to be heard?Heavy Metal, man.

They Are Smol, the Smolverse, Jornissians, Dorarizin, Karnakians, and all intellectual content in this story are credited to TinyPrancingHorse. All rights reserved. TPH has a Website and a Patreon for anyone interested.TPH Author Page:https://www.reddit.com/r/HFY/wiki/authors/tinyprancinghorse#wiki_they_are_smol

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Status
Completed
Year
2023
Author
AtlasSolid

Tags

SCI-FIMALE LEADSHORT STORY

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4.5/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
1,065

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RedMuffinRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The narrative skillfully weaves together humor, emotion, and social commentary, creating a mesmerizing tale filled with layers of depth and entertainment value. The profound exploration of human-xeno interactions and the power of music adds depth to the storyline, leaving a lasting impact on the reader.
    The seamless integration of multiple elements, all while keeping the narrative cohesive and compelling, highlights the author's mastery of storytelling and creativity.
    Overall, the story is a well-crafted and enjoyable piece that delivers a one-of-a-kind and unforgettable reading experience.
    Style of Writing
    The story adopts a playful and engaging tone, blending humor with moments of reflection. The use of dialogue effectively conveys the personalities of the characters and adds authenticity to their interactions. The descriptive language paints vivid scenes and captures the atmosphere of the story.
    Story
    The story follows Marc and his band of human musicians as they navigate the challenges of staging underground concerts in a xeno-dominated colony. The narrative explores themes of rebellion, identity, and the power of music to unite individuals across species boundaries. The development of the plot keeps readers engaged with its mix of tension, emotion, and humor.
    Grammar
    The text is well-organized with clear sentences and correct grammar. The dialogue flows smoothly, making the characters' interactions more engaging. There aren't any big grammar mistakes that make it hard to understand.
    Character Development
    The characters in the story are well-developed, each with their unique traits and roles within the band. Marc emerges as a relatable protagonist grappling with feelings of frustration and determination. The interactions between the band members and their Xeno audience showcase growth, empathy, and mutual respect.
    Overall
    In general, the story really shines in its storytelling, character development, and exploration of themes. The mix of music, rebellion, and in