How Does One Become Strong?

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Description

What would you do if your parents were some of the strongest beings in the universe? If you are like Jack, then you would want to kill them. That's exactly what he sets out to do in a new world where the strong become rulers and the weak become stepping stones for the strong. Will Jack achieve ultinate Strength? Will he be able to kill his bastard parents? Mainly, will he even be able to survive?-By me

As this is my first story please feel free to give advice and/or criticism.?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: aLUMINUMer

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 47
Views: 19,173

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Anime-SenseiRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Overall this story is promising, however, it is not without elements of a story that I dislike. Starting off the style is not really descriptive, the skills they are like iron blank or steel blank but that's not that cool, or unique. Continuing in with my review the story I liked it quite a bit at the start but the MC is really lucky, and that luck surpasses what should be possible. Not going to go in detail on this element of the story here but he could be less fortunate. With much less potential.
Grammar is pretty good, but there are quite a few run on sentences that could be split into multiple sentences. Lastly are the characters, Streak, the bird is pretty unbelievable, only in one way though the way he calls jack. Master, a bird would not infer to call Jack even if he is stronger master. At least not right away. Jack is a fine protagonist but thinks a little more with his fists than with his head. That's not realistic since he is in a very dangerous place.
Work on the spacing, some block of text are huge! Good luck :)
Arashi ZarosRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
this could drove away other reader since it feel too cringe and related with that character (you or other reader aready know why so don't need to explain it ),if this character was just matched with that character name then you should add some more detail for the description novel so they don't think this is another fan fiction of that anime
and now the novel is getting better,but don't leave quickly after read "Death" chapter ,it won't take the MC like 30 chapter to get the strengh back and after that chapter it still interesting to read