Hopping Celestial Fox

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Description

There are portals to another world all over the city.

And only I can see and open them.

That’s what I discovered when I got sick and tired of being shocked by these only-visible-to-me floating purple things and tried to rip one apart… Only to literally rip open a dimensional hole into a familiar place from a VR game.

What is going on? Was it actually a real world all along? Were the devs aware of it? Could I… smuggle potions and magical items to Earth with this?

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Hosted on Scribblehub, RoyalRoad, and my Patreon.

The first book is now also available on Amazon and Itch.io under the name 'Portals of the Celestial Fox' here: https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B0DK2BN1RK and https://bottledchaos.itch.io/portals-of-the-celestial-fox

If you find this work anywhere else, it's stolen.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: BottledChaos

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 192
Views: 104,101

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Community Reviews(2)

Lavolpe3Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm not a big fan of gender bend, but this is how you do it. I love how you don't make it about sex or harm. I like to see more, so please keep going. The world is mysterious and needs to be explored, and I need to see what his true form is. I just started reading I'm on chapter 8 at the time of writing please don't stop.
zoru_22Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love this story unconditionally. It's a touch slow to get going, but overall the plot beats don't stick around too long and the mystery grows ever larger as time goes on.
Currently it's on hiatus, and i can easily feel the reason in my bones. The scope becomes so large for the authors of gets more and more difficult to manage.
If i was to recc anything, i would retcon some stuff in the latest chapter and dial back the goals and let the protag solve fully one of the ongoing and primary complications.
Specifically,
The moment the devs show up in the latest chapter you can feel the author's aspirations getting higher than their ability to manage
Which is totally understandable. Anyway, good story, i really love the interactions and ideas at play. I recc one thing to the author, and that's what i said above: Let a problem be fully solved before adding new things.