Hokage: I Traveled Through Time With The Tenseigan

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*【Multiple Girls, Single is Welcome by Mistake】**

Shigeru traveled to the world of *Naruto* with the legendary golden item, the Tenseigan, from a game, and became a member of the Hyuga branch family. After fusing with the Tenseigan, the seal of the Caged Bird was broken, and he was no longer under the control of the clan.

Though seemingly ordinary, he successfully attracted Tsunade’s attention. Even Kushina, who had just arrived in Konoha, treated him differently!

Tsunade: "This kid is mine. If you want to bully him, you’ll have to go through me!"

Kushina: "Shigeru, I don’t have much to offer, but let me spend money on you!"

While everyone thought Shigeru was just a degenerate Hyuga with weakened Byakugan, relying on others for support, he shocked the world with his prowess in a single battle!

Byakugan degradation? Do you even understand the power of the Tenseigan?

Override gravity and repulsion, alter planetary orbits, and summon meteor strikes.

Create puppets and breathe life into them.

When the Akatsuki Organization unleashed 100,000 White Zetsu, they were obliterated by an army of puppets.

And when Madara was about to dominate the battlefield, a falling meteor was cut in two..

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
Kind dan

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Rating
2.5/ 5.0
Followers
13
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12,047

Chapters(31 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • SiliconWolfRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    TL;DR: This is a chore to read, and not interesting enough to make it worth the effort.
    I don't know if there is a specific description for this type of writing, but I really dislike it every time I read it.  It involves saying something several times, and each time it is written as a dramatic statement.  So if this was an advanced review, the style score would be very low.
    Also, there are quite a few sentences that simply don't make sense.  Perhaps it's missing words, or the wrong words are used.  In any case, it adds to the difficulty of reading and enjoying the story.
    From what I can tell of the underlying story and worldbuilding, everything seems fine.  I can't say I'm hooked, but I'm also not hating it either.
    The characters are also fine.  The main character is a bit too confident, but not overbearing.  The side characters are more or less fine.
    If edited, I would be interested in picking this story back up.