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Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • LeplussommbredesdonjonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    N'abandonne pas!
    Au pire publie sur plusieurs sites pour toucher un gros public mais stp n’ab Pas. On est avec toi, Vive le français! Vivement la suite!
  • FolkensedaiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    On peut etre français et lire principalement de la fantasy en anglais ^^
    Bon courage pour ton histoire.
  • HazeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Etant français moi aussi je t'encourage vivement a continué ton histoire et je te donnerais mon avis a ton 20éme chapitre bonne chance pour la suite
  • dahero9910Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This first chapter was a great start! The scenes with the forest fire felt intense and real, and Aika’s awkward, funny personality made her instantly likable. I enjoyed the mix of action and humor, especially when she accidentally set the hospital curtain on fire! Looking forward to seeing where the story goes next. Great job!
  • metaldarwin971Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Bon début d'histoire le concept est original. Vu que tu es français sur un site anglais je t'encourage vivement moi aussi.
  • Apollo149Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    General Overview: A teenage seventeen-year-old witch, Aika, is bored of her life in the woods. She fantasizes of moving to the big city. Following a life-altering catastrophe that forces her to flee her home, she finds herself in Surbrianna, a city on the verge of becoming a major city. She has tremendous success making friendships with individuals she has never met before, while her mushroom companion, whom she summoned with her magic years previously, tries to locate her. Her life in the metropolis leads to tremendous success when she meets a musician who teaches her to play the piano, resulting in her being a well-known virtuoso.
    This feels like a coming-of-age story blends elements of fantasy, friendship, and self-discovery.
    The narrative explores themes of identity, belonging, and the power of human connection. As Aika navigates the challenges of urban life, she forms unexpected bonds with diverse individuals. Her magical abilities, even with a broken wand, though initially a source of isolation, become a tool for both self-expression and community building.
    The author skillfully weaves together elements of magic and realism, creating a world that feels both familiar and fantastical. So far character development is strong, even though it is just the beginning, particularly, whose growth and transformation are both heartwarming and inspiring.
    While the plot may occasionally feel predictable, the engaging characters and the vivid world-building make this a worthwhile read for fans of young adult fantasy.
  • Toto69Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    bon début malgré  un MC est peu passif qui laisse commander l’elfe mais il a l’air de s’ameliorer après