Heterogeneity of Beasts

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Fantasy Beast Story taking place about 300 years in the future. The protagonist wants to live a peaceful and tranquil live, but will he be able too? Lets follow him as he adventures through the different situations in his live to find out if he gets to live like he wants or if he is forced into a life that he will end up regretting.

This is fantasy and is not related to today's world in anyway so it will be useless to try and correlate any aspect of the novel with today's world.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Morphfang

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Views: 1,094

Chapters(8 total)

What readers say about Heterogeneity of Beasts

“Overall: I think that the story and character score are what really matter, so I went for the closest score as opposed to trying to find an average or something like that because I don't think that's fair. Style: some of the ways you tell the story can make…”
PhoebeKRoyal Road4.5 / 5

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(1)

PhoebeKRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Overall: I think that the story and character score are what really matter, so I went for the closest score as opposed to trying to find an average or something like that because I don't think that's fair.
Style: some of the ways you tell the story can make the reader less engaged at times, try to opt for show don't tell! I also think that sometimes your sentence structure can get redundant and slow-paced. Maybe try to write a creative line or two every paragraph, or try to include some figurative language. Those things can really set a strong tone that lets the reader visualize your story better.
Grammar: sometimes you switch verb tenses, but your quote punctuation is spot on, maybe try for some compound sentences, it might read quicker. I also think that your writing is very good--none of your sentences were incomplete and there were no obnoxious run-ons to my knowledge.
Story: very cool story, I love traditional science-fiction, and it seems like the world is very complex and requires a lot of in-story historical context. I am excited to see more ways for the characters to interact with their setting and lore!
Character: 1st person lets the reader get to know how your character thinks about things, love it! Character is unique and engaging, love.