Heros plus 2
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Seraphs the most dangerous existence the world has ever known and created, these being were ruthless killers made by Japan. Most were taken away at a young age from their family's and experimented and tortured on. Most children died during this time and the ones that made it out alive..... were beings of mass destruction feared by everyone. These beings were very active during the war of the world which Japan was winning because of their abilities. Two of which, are the best they have. During a mission of exterminating a strong hold of America the two strongest Seraphs Akito and Kage get sucked into a mini black hole sending them two a fantasy world, what will happen to these two or what will happen to the world they're going to? AN note: Hey guys Aqua here, look I'm only 14 and don not have great skills and writing so I don't mind criticism I actually like it, but don't be a dick.
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- Hiatus
- Author
- Aqua334
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- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 11
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- FennRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I’ll increase the review as the story progresses. Not much to criticize yet. *evil laughter*
The style of writing is awesome. Some small changes could be done like using “—–” instead of [—–], but that’s just a personal preference. Taking out the names before dialogue would also make the paragraphs look neater.
I don’t have much to talk about story-wise, considering the lack of chapters, but i’ll give full marks for now to help publicize the story, since I’ve taken a liking to it.
Grammar-wise, there a couple “easily fix-able” mistakes here and there. I’ll give full marks once they’re taken care of.
You’re starting to flesh out the race (If that’s what you’re calling them) a bit. Considering this is just the first chapter, i’d say it’s a good start. Tragedy is always a heart-wrencher.