Heroes Of 21st century !
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Description
A giant meteor hit our planet earth,releasing a strange energy throughout the world which gives a teenager some strange abilities.........Long story short a teenager got some strange ability and decided to become a superhero! (hah! kids knower days) only to find out it isn't that easy of a job or well a hobby especially when you are scaredy cat and a introvert social outcast after trying once and failing horribly(really HORRIBLY) he waited 3 years and has once again decided to try..............Boy got to live his dream!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- dxhvv
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 15,119
Chapters(11 total)
- Chapter 10:Golden Horizontal Lightning In The Sky And A Ghost Under The Bed!Nov 13, 2016
- Chapter 9: The Fruitcake Knows Nothing!Nov 12, 2016
- Chapter 8:A Midnight Thearpy?Nov 11, 2016
- Chapter 7:I Hate Romantic Comedy!Apr 30, 2016
- Chapter 6:Every fairytale has a Dark Side!Apr 29, 2016
- Chapter 5:A tour to the hideout!Apr 29, 2016
- Chapter 4:Prison In Basement!Apr 29, 2016
- Chapter 3:You are not a hero!Apr 28, 2016
- Chapter 2:You won't mind if I cut off your head a little,Right?Apr 28, 2016
- Chapter 1:Here comes the justice...................with a little topping of revenge!Apr 27, 2016
- Prologue: I will be a HERO!............(this time for sure!)Apr 27, 2016
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Community Reviews(2)
- DurrendalRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This review is to express my extreme indignation at the review posted by Brutus Hans.
This person is entirely out of his depth if he thinks this fiction is anywhere near the level of Godliness Marine was. Burn it into your flimsy retinas, ‘MARINE’, even the name gives you shudders of pleasure in its irreproachable quality.
This fictions is nothing like the MARINE, hereafter which should only be mentioned in all caps. This fic that I am writing review of is just…meh .
Just look at this absolute perfection, how ca you even compare this?
http://royalroadl.com/fiction/5396
Never compare it to MARINE!! NEVEAAAAR! - AxelordRoyal Road★★ 2.0Even the fiction page’s text has mistakes. [ (hah! kids knower days) ], like what the hell is this? It’s sort of surreal.
The rest of the story; well I can’t exactly get into it. The author has a lot of problems with form and structure. Ellipsis should not be overused, for one.
Punctuation is out of this world; as in dead from the lack of breathable air. It’s enough of a problem that it deters and impact on the rest of the story. The inconsistency is the worst. Sometime a particular element is rightly done and two lines later is isn't.