Hero's breaking
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Description
Many just call it "the Event". A blue flame engulfing earth without actually hurting anybody. Soon after that humans developed superhuman powers. Taking flight, dodging bullets, nothing was impossible for These espers as they where called. Many fractions fight against each other for power and control. Some want to get rid of them, imprison them or simply use the power for the gain of wealth.
Join Alexis Mercer. An underestimated esper living in the united states. Robbed of her Lover, her best friend and even her normal School life she sets out for revenge.
Arc 1: The Raiders [Finished]
Arc 2: The Clan [Work in Progress.]
Arc 3: ??? [In Progress somewere in my mind >_>]
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I'm just a high School Senior having fun writing about random stuff. So please have mercy on my Soul ;__;
English is not my native language so please excuse my bad usage of tenses and grammar. Feel free to comment about things you think should be made better and I will try to fix it, although I don't know how much time I can invest into this.
I hope at least somebody can enjoy this Little Story. Can't promise frequent updates. Feedback is highly appreciated. Rem
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- CrimsonRem
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 135
- Views
- 121,731
Chapters(53 total)
- 51. Unsuspected NeighborsOct 30, 2016
- 50. ArrivalOct 27, 2016
- Rework and Q & A I guessApr 1, 2016
- 49. ConvictionApr 1, 2016
- 48. ConsequencesMar 29, 2016
- Ark 2 - 47. A new objectiveMar 28, 2016
- 46. ComradeshipMar 27, 2016
- 45. SlaughterMar 27, 2016
- 44. Old AcquaintancesMar 27, 2016
- 43. ConsequencesMar 26, 2016
- 42. Five TeamsMar 25, 2016
- 41. GatheringMar 25, 2016
- 40. Clan PhilosophyMar 25, 2016
- 39. The ClanMar 25, 2016
- 38. LoyaltyMar 24, 2016
- 37. Traitors?Mar 22, 2016
- 36. FailureMar 19, 2016
- 35. Rules and OrdersMar 17, 2016
- 34. PreparationMar 16, 2016
- 33. Betrayal?Mar 15, 2016
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Community Reviews(4)
- FourgettingRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Excellent. M isn't all wishy-washy, has excellent examples of society's tendency to create blindly self-righteous groups. The grammar is quite goo, with the occasional missed letter or comma. There's also sometimes a letter here an there that should be capitalized that isn't, like a standalone "Fml" or the group names like "Raiders." Pretty good backstory, the story seems to move along at a pretty decent pace, an has a high publish rate, at least for now. I also think the chapters are a ta short, but considering the pace at which you are publishing them it's ok; an also your inexperience is a factor in this that will change with time. Just be careful to not let writing get in way of your studies. Keep it up and good work
- gingerbread_manRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This story has great character development, compelling storytelling and a really interesting premise that reminded me a lot of the Trace webcomic. all in all an excellently written fiction defiantly worth your time.
- MaobeelzebubRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Sofar it's a good "super hero" story, 4 stars from me because it lacks that little extra which would make me check for updates every day.
- eric78945Royal Road★★★★ 4.0It seem good and sound good but a little short by I think that this fiction can be very good just have to update fast and become a little long for every chapter Can became a very good read and entaining But still one chapter so who knows