Hero of Hell: Second Life

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

Icanica

• Chapter 5: Exile Part 2
  Jul 18, 2023
• Chapter 4: Exile Part 1
  Jul 11, 2023
• Chapter 3: The Core Revolution
  Jul 8, 2023
• Chapter 2: Me, Myself and I
  Jul 8, 2023
• Chapter 1: A New Life with New Restraints
  Jul 8, 2023
• Prologue
  Jul 7, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• Alexanders (Katsu)Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Sooooo....We follow the hero that fought against all odds and managed to culminate its path in victory defeating a goddess of death!
  What did that achieve?
  The death of a loved one and the destruction of hell.
  After that he got a second chance at life as the son of aristocracy keeping his ability to eat and assimilate the souls of the departed.
  Style:
  No complaints it follows a good narrative and since the MC can absorb the souls of the fallen he can interact, integrate and learn about them. It is a good way to get information of the world so kudos to the author for that.
  Grammar:
  Everything is fine.
  Story:
  Since the MC can integrate the souls of the fallen into his conscious stream, he can get an auditorium full of himself to discuss and interact with, even if that leaves him somewhat crazy (?).
  The story has him using that knowledge as best intended and is a good way to further the plot without using deus ex machina mechanics. So really, Kudos to the author for that use of in-story mechanics.
  Characters:
  So far everyone is doing its best!
  Little sister is adorable, older brother is caring...Father & Mother are stuck-up nobility as one would expect.
  The soul of the departed act as it should...And there is an obvious discrepancy among the souls in his auditorium even if they are getting assimilated. So no complaints on that
• BasiliusRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  "Rebirth and Redemption: A Chance to Make Things Right" is a captivating and immersive tale that delves into the themes of vengeance, redemption, and the consequences of one's actions.
  Story: The story's premise, centered around a character who has experienced hellish torment and seeks revenge against the gods, immediately captures the reader's attention and sets the stage for an epic journey.
  Style: The narrative skillfully balances between the dark and intense moments in Orion's past and the opportunity for redemption in his newfound life. Orion's transformation from a vengeful warrior to an aristocrat's child allows for character growth and complex emotions to be explored in chapters to come. The internal struggle Orion faces, torn between his desire for revenge and his commitment to making things right makes for a great
  The world-building in the story is vivid and imaginative. The depiction of the infernal plane of hell is rich in detail, transporting readers to an otherworldly setting.
  The pacing of the story is generally well-maintained, with a good balance between action sequences and moments of introspection. The author's prose is engaging and descriptive, allowing readers to visualize the scenes and empathize with the characters' emotions.
  The dialogues are deep and serves to deepen the characterization and drive the plot forward.
  Grammar: Grammar is nearly flawless, the narration is direct and clear, which is important because the story is complex and one can easily get lost if not for the author's talent in directing attention to what matters.
  Characters: It's abit early to judge, but I've found Calista, Alaric's twin sister, to be especially adoring and relatable. Her introspection and her feelings of inferiority when near her brother are well established.
  One aspect that could be improved would be the art cover and font, it truly doesn't reflect how beautifully written and deep the story is and may be detracting potential readers.
  Overall, "Rebirth and
• M.H. KadifichiRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The series excels in its style, story, grammar, and character development. The writing style effectively captures the tone and voice of the narrative, immersing readers in the story world. The compelling plot, filled with corruption, injustice, and the protagonist's fight for justice, keeps readers engaged and eager to see how events will unfold. The strong grammar and well-rounded characters further enhance the overall quality of the chapter, making it a highly enjoyable and engaging read.
  Style: The writing style is highly effective in creating a captivating and immersive reading experience. The tone strikes a balance between suspense and introspection, conveying the urgency and danger faced by the protagonist, Orion, while also delving into his thoughts and motivations. The voice is consistent and engaging, capturing Orion's perspective and presenting authentic dialogue between the characters. The use of vivid imagery paints a clear picture of the settings and events, enhancing the reader's connection to the story. The structure of the chapters flows seamlessly, maintaining a steady pace and building tension as the plot unfolds.
  Story: The story takes readers on a compelling journey as Orion quests for justice. The uncovering of deeper layers of corruption within the city of Prelic adds intrigue and complexity to the narrative. Orion's fight against the flawed system, coupled with the systemic injustice he confronts, raises the stakes and provides a meaningful backdrop for his actions. The plot progression and revelations leave readers eager to discover how Orion will navigate the obstacles in his path and bring about meaningful change.
  Grammar: The chapter exhibits strong grammar, with well-constructed sentences and a clear command of language. The writing is polished and free from grammatical errors, ensuring a smooth and enjoyable reading experience. The attention to grammar enhances the overall quality of the writing and contributes to the effectiveness of th
• ParlaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  We have to get stronger and we eat souls to do that. Souls bring memories and that means plenty of skills. The concept is not only simple but extremely well done in this particular setting. The world itself is fairly easy to understand and the characters are very clear on their drives and desires. If anybody does not like this, they probably sympathize with the mother of the MC. Burn them at the stake!