Hero? Again? No Way
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
O, Humankind have you heard this story?
A man made full of flesh,
Despite being stabbed in the heart, he will still smile,
Despite being burned over all the body, he will still laugh,
Despite being smitten from head to toe, he will still move,
Despite being torn apart from all his body, he will still walk,
He is the one hated by the heaven itself,
The Immortal Hero
*Before reading, please take caution of the horrible gramma as I am not a native english speaker, there will be a lot of horrendous mistake. Please wear a safety helmet before anything happen.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- alennor
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 189
- Views
- 44,661
Chapters(11 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(2)
- admiraRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Not bad, but not stellar, either.
The grammar isn't that bad, but the author manages to avoid the worst sorts of mistakes. Mostly issues with tense, but the capitalization and punctuation are pretty good. It's more or less on the same level as a lot of native English speakers I've seen.
The plot...so-so. It's actually pretty original, but the way it's delivered is very abrupt. - johnopediaRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The premise of the story is interesting and I'm curious to see where it goes. That being said, an editor would do wonders for this story. The jumps between the MC's thoughts and the conversation are rough and hard to follow. Determining who is actually speaking between the MC and other characters is confusing and hard to follow as none of the dialog is differentiated.