Hearts of Ice (completed)

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Description

A girl, a boy, the Falconers... they're in the middle of a war.

How did it come to this? From the discovery of the planet... down to the making of that serum it matters no more! Like it or not, Fate has planned it all out.Mean it death or separation, they'll have to survive, someway, somehow.

It doesn't help when a pinch of romance is added to the chaos...

Beyond that impenetrable forest... over the plains of thick grass... surely there are no secrets?

Heh, I'll be rewriting, probably.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2017
Author: Chrystal Jung

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 21
Views: 41,947

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Community Reviews(2)

PieWizardRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style: I quite like the third person style being utilized in this story. It allows for the author to move around a scene and seems to be how the author likes to write. The style also involves having some larger paragraphs with dialogue, so I find that as a plus, but it is something to know.
Story: Can't really talk much about the story as it hasn't really taken off, but the forshadowing is good, considering what may happen. I think that it has a lot of room to go and has many options open to it.
Grammar: To be honest the grammar is really good. It has very few mistakes and I enjoy that it flows well. Even with the grammar, it doesn't break up badly
Character: Haven't learned much about the story so far, which means that the characters are also underdeveloped, so this will get better as we learn more about their journey and struggle. As the children grow up and learn from experiences
TheJackWriteRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
THere are reason for why I put such a high score for this novel.
Rather than talking here... let just read them. I assured you, it worth your 4 hour to read them twice.
JUST DO IT!