He Who Embrace the Time
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He who was Abandoned,
He who was Betrayed,
He who Suffer because of Love,
He who Sacrificed for Greater Needs.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Markiant
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- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
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- 259
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- Lia OpheliaRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Hi! I do read tons of books before including LN and stuff so I'm kinda familiar with things like this. First, work on your grammar. Learn when to use proper punctuation marks. This is very vital since it errors like that disrupts the rhythm of your readers. Second, you might wanna ask for help from someone on proofreading your work since while reading I notice some incorrect spelling, wrong usage of pronouns well it's just about the grammar really. You get to work on that and you would be fine. All in all, it's not too shabby for your first work. Just improve on your language skills and I really like the appearance of the MC UwU I'm more into simplistic type of MC but this guy looks really cool. Good job ^_^