Hdhd

Self-Published

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Status
Hiatus
Author
Zeronight

Tags

HISTORICAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.0/ 5.0

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Community Reviews(1)

  • librarysmilesRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    In chapter 1, the main character gains epic wish fulfillment. What happens when someone is already a winner?
    My personal interest was already mostly lost because either the protagonist falls down (sad) or is thrown to a higher state (artificial).
    The main character is placed in a book world as a comparison character. The original protagonist feels threatened by the main character's existence and I assume this story will drag the original protagonist into the mud and let him roll.
    The original protagonist has a weak to strong plot. The main character has a strong to stronger plot.
    My hope was for some immediate obvious struggle like "but I don't like attention" or "but I don't have good relatives". Internal or external stressors are ways to induce organic growth in a character, but are not present in this story for this main character.
    In conclusion, this story is not for me.