Having a Common Game Ability In Normal Life

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As long as i can remember, i can see something other people can't see

Yes, on the top right of my vision, i have something that looks like a map, does it useful? how does something that blocks 1/32 of my vision to be useful? Does it have to be useful.. right?

As i get older, this looks like "mini-map" in a video game that i played, so i decided to call this Mini-map

at least I'm not the only one with this kind of thing.. from what I've found, everyone has different ability, for example my little sister can see another person status, there's a person that can heal wounds by eating meat, there's a person that once a day can spin roulette to get reward, there's a person that can jump twice in the air and there's a person that can throw fireballs..... wait a minute!?

the story will be slow, since i just write this to train my english

anyhow the idea of this story will be

if someone can throw a fireball does their hand burns?

if someone can jump for 30m can they survive the fall?

if a bard play a song that can regen their allies, why’s the enemy isn’t regenerating?

if a cleris creates a barrier can their allies attack from inside barrier?

and About the first few chapter

i know the grammar was really bad

but it’ll help me if you guys read the first few chapter and go straight to the last and tell me have i improve or not

P.S i hope The world has “common language” feature so everyone speak in the same tongue lol

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
KidyZ

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.0/ 5.0
Followers
41
Views
45,827

Chapters(46 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • waterbear06Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I liked the idea of the story but I read a few chapters and the grammar and spelling was really bad
  • xtremeloldudeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Honestly the story and the idea is good, i'd give it a 4.5/5. However the grammar is like when someone does a bad machine translation of a japanese novel so it's hard to even know what's going on 40% of the time
  • gameinator1Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    i like the idea and the characters
    but it could be more
    ps: hope to see more good luck
  • Lolgeek456Royal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    Idea interesting grammar and spelling horrible can't read past 1st chap also remove the brackets around people's names and replace them with Ume said or says so it reads a little easier