HavenFall (Thousand Lands)

Self-Published

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Description

Warning: Very Dark Fantasy and Brutal.How do you rule over HavenFall where kings and queens are like coppers exchanging hands, where a subtle gesture can make or break a decade old treaty, and where betrayals and intrigue happen at every turn?Love? Hatred? Cunning? Cruelty? Magic?No, it is none of these.There is a reason why I am going to rule HavenFall. And that is because it is me.Love. Fury. Cunning. Magic. Determination. I have them all, and all of them in excess. But most of all, I have my Omnus.Every single queen and king that dares stand in my way. Every single bastard that has fucked me over. Every beast, goblins, orcs, or humans that stand in my way. I will kill them all. Kill their grandmothers, kill their grandfathers, kill their mothers, kill their cousins, kill their sons and daughters, kill their dogs. Down to the last goat and chicken, I will kill them all.And perhaps then, there will finally be that bliss I seek so dearly.I am Prince Gladius Zane Noxus, the one who will rule HavenFall.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
Ninjax

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURETRAGEDYMULTIPLE LOVERSPSYCHOLOGICAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
110
Views
40,949

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • Zombie UnicorneRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    WARNING: Story contains very dark and mature subject matter. Weak hearted readers at risk and may find this story “distasteful”
    A non-spoiler quick review.
    I just love Dark, Edgy and mature stories and this one is a perfect example of such. It’s really dark and brutal. Luv it! so don’t underestimates the author’s warning in the synopsis, because he/she really means it. This story won’t carter to everyone’s taste because of it’s very dark and mature nature but of those who do, will find a unparalleled experience.
    The story is one of the best and darkest I’ve seen here in RRl. It starts brutal and stays brutal from start and to the latest chapter. I don’t want to spoil anything but the story and plot is top notch.
    The world building is one of the best I’ve seen, the story doesn’t info dump you like other stories out there. The world building gradually develops as our MC(MCs) interact with the world and it’s inhabitants. The world building isn’t a forced info dumping session but a gradual and seamless build up.
    Furthermore, the medieval politics is a great touch.
    The MC is definitely one of the main pillars that makes this story great. The MC is the most unique type of character I’ve seen so far here in RRl. I don’t want to spoil anything but he is comparable to the girl in “inside out”. All I could say is that he/they/omnus is very complex and doesn’t fall into any traditional character tropes of any kind.
    The style is perfect, it flows and you won’t find any problems going into the “zone”
    Grammar is almost flawless 95% of the time. Mistakes are rare and far between and are barely worth mentioning.
    A great example of a true Mature, Psychological and tragedy story. Allot of story I’ve seen doesn’t concentrate much on these, despite having them in their tags, but this story, makes these three genre proud.
    Great job Ninjax. The chapter release frequency and Quality is insane! Do you get sleep much? Don’t overwork yourself you hear…
  • magicdownunderRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    So Dark.... So Brutal...
    I guess I was warned but usually they're just words authors just throw out - this one is different, this one means it.
  • RaphaelRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    So to start off my first impression of this was interesting as I read a bit of the first chapter pr prologue whatever it is, now I want anyone who reads this to understand fully that I care very little if not at all about the darkness or brutality or sexual deviant acts on a fiction so long as I find it interesting in fact those themes don't bother me much so I can say I am unbiased when throwing a little review out there for people to maybe glance. As I was saying my first impression was interesting until I got to chapter 2 and read it, now I am aware that judging something based on the first 2 chapters is super harsh so that's why I won't reflect my Score upon my Review, however I must say this felt very very very familiar to me and in the first chapter I couldn't place it but after reading chapter 2 it hit me like a 12 ton truck hits a squirrel totally by surprise the reason why the fiction felt so was because it reminded me an awful lot of the trilogy "Empire of Thorns" by Mark Lawrence I mean wow did it bring back unpleasant memories (picture me shuddering very severely here) and so soon as I read the line "There is a reason why I am going to rule the Thousand Lands." I felt I could no longer go on. So yeah I will stop there just because of the bad memories it brings if it gets better or doesn't I don't care in but regardless I give the writer my best and truly hope he doesn't give up in his work despite the comments of some (like me in this case) because as you can see some people just judge your work based on past experiences. Anyways good luck to any who read this and I hope you all enjoy it. =D
  • Valdert101Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Very dark story. Plot seems to be developing well.  I started reading this a few minutes ago and it got me hooked lol. This type of story ain't for the weak minded chumps out there but for anyone that doesn't mind gore and the like i suggest you take a look at it. Hopefully it updates every now and then and not die like some of the fan fics around here tend to.