Harry potter: The ring maker

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Description

Nicholas Iron was reborn in the world of harry potter as an orphan with the ring maker system , this is his story.

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2023
Author
Loskro

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSUPERNATURALSCHOOL LIFEMALE LEAD

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
1,456
Views
5,727,847

Chapters(602 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • QueenInRagsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It's a good Harry Potter fan fic. Though not a literary masterpiece, I've quite enjoyed all I've read of it so far. It's not perfect, and it is quite clearly one of those fictions where an author takes a good hour out of every day to write a chapter, but even then, It's quite nice.
    So, grammar-wise, the whole thing is solid. Not perfect per say, but definitely solid. The prose reads well, and although there are a few points here and there that could have been done with a little more description, I have been quite satisfied with the flow found within this novel. If I were to give the author any advice with regards to grammar, it would just basically be to add in just a smidge more detail here and there.
    Style-wise, the chapters are short and quick, but utterly delectable. With the rate that this author has been pumping them out, however, this should not be an issue. If I were to give the author any advice it would simply be to perhaps just smooth out some of the rather large plot jumps that happen within the first few chapters, or any that may be coming forward. I may also consider moving that entire chapter that has become an author's note into an actual author's note. For readers (like myself) who were simply enjoying moving from chapter to chapter, it was quite jarring to be interrupted by your heartfelt pains.
    Character-wise, it's a Harry Potter Fan Fic. No character has been shown to be especially deep, and that's perfectly fine. My only concern would be with how the MC just edges the line almost of Gary Sue within the first few chapters before slowly leaning back into "overpowered" normalness personality-wise. I don't know, even with all the fluff, the Masters's Degree in Chemistry that only pops up once was the only thing I have a large gripe with.
    Story-wise, I'm really excited to see where this goes! Its a hard line to toe mixing different fictions, concepts, and a system into one world to have them realistically mix. Overall the only advice here would be to
  • Aura_2062Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    just go read it, give it a chance, for if you try it and don't end up liking it you won't loose anything but if this is your kinda thing and you *don't* try it it would simply be too much of a loss. I am rating this solely on my enjoyment factor as that is what i care about and since i am not a skilled enough critiquer to do anything else anyway, but yeah, im just glad i found this ^^
  • Azael31Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    La verdad que me encantó la historia no es extremadamente específica pero eso es lo que hace que uno se enganche tanto además que se nota el desarrollo tanto de la historia como del escritor, si fuera por mi 10 estrellas le daría. Me encanto sobre todo la parte en la que explica los conceptos de realidad, tiempo y espacio
  • darkrikeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a good one. If you want something that makes use of the original world and expand on it then this is for you.
    A warning. The first few chapters are a little messy and short plus simple written. But it becomes much better. The author says he is not a professional writer and that holds true but that does not mean that this is in anyway bad or even close to bad at lest in the latter chapters. In truth the only thing bad in the beginning chapters is how short they are. But that is something the author fixes.
    This is good.
    Now to what I like about it.
    Firstly is that the author actually makes something with the existing characters. Basically they are not and their merit is not completely ignored as in other harry potter fanfiction I have read. Meaning that the teachers have actually skills. That those not mean the MC is not powerful. But it does mean that the MC needs to grow.
    Speaking of growth. The system is not owerpowerd or every present which I like.
    A third thing I like is that the author is making something more out of what already exist. That does not mean he ignores the events of the book or passes over them. But we gets something more than teenagers going too school.
    So to give a receive.
    The grammar is good, simple and not noticeable.
    World building is good. And the author as said is build in upon it.
    Characters. I can not call it good good. But I am comfortable with what is. The authors keeps it simple.
    Style. As I said it is simple and not to complicated but it does have a good flow, things are happening and every chapters stands on its own sort of.
    Story. This is something I like. Basically the author is using what is already there but with a skilled additional characters. There is only one single moment that I actually do not like. One moment that was disturbing in how forceful it was. Readers will notice it when you reach it and what I can say about it is that it becomes better so do not get discouraged when you reach that moment.
    All in all. A si
  • CODITTORoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a really solid HP novel. The crafting system was interesting to read about and the world building is solid.
    Overall: A fantastic read!
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  • DanTheMan181Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    (Spoiler warning) I'll be the first to admit, I was skeptical that this to could match up to other fan fictions of the same genre, Im finding myself immersed in this magical world you have borrowed, even the ring making isn't as overplayed/overpowered as I thought it'd be. With the system only being a minor cheat all things considered. I am interested in seeing what changes happen as he comes closer to being a full elf however.
  • zachbrownRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The title of the review is misleading on purpose. It is a good new fan fic but the way it is done makes the world loosely resemble the original world. so much is added and even taken away that you could almost call it a whole new fic. the grammar is good but there are some obvious moments where a letter or simple word is forgotten in editing. this does not take away form the story however. The chapters are short so that is kind of a bummer.
  • natsu27Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This would make a fantastic book series and I suggest you contact JK Rowling cuz she would probably be back you up so if you have to go all the way to London to do this I suggest you do along with the author of The Lord of the rings series
  • AshClarke91Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is fun and has some great features with crafting and magic.
    My only problem is that I have caught up with the new postings and have to wait for more!
    My comment to the author is well done! And keep them coming as it's something I want to keep reading, you have created a very interesting MC and I am annoyed/overjoyed at the little teaser you put in about his past in that alleyway, I wish your enemies the pox and your allies wealth!!!!.
  • SailtrenRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Story was good. Was afraid of usual HP cliche where golden trio is a humongous cructch. Thankfully it wasnt so. Also no info walls related to system. Ending indeed was chaos, but it at least brought story to end.
    Interesting take on gods. But what about other gods? Not Greek, but other, or i missed something?
    Thank you!!!