Harry Potter and the Insert of the Self
Self-Published
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Description
[Currently On Hiatus because of study...]
As like any who are of the same generation as I am, I am a huge HP fan... Always running from reality to find solace in JK's world... But never in my wildest dreams have I expected to find myself LITERALLY in it... As Harry Potter himself... Fair Warning: This is not your ordinary Self-Insert fiction.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- BernKastel
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 191
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- 40,024
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(9)
- YoloRRLreaderRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I would read this just for the commentary, even if I didn't like the story. This is definitely going to be a favorite. Lowest amount of errors in grammar and spelling I have ever seen on this site without an editor/PR. Makes for a good story and so far is going great. I will definitely be following this for a while if it keeps to the books for the most part. I don't mind the deviations a bit, but the world building of the HP books is a little lacking so please don't deviate too much. The paraphrasing is done very well so as to not bore the reader with material in the Rowling books. Very enjoyable, love it, and please don't drop this until at least the 3rd book is done.
- ZeroChan345Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5Hope it won't get dropped.
- tactRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0So far it can't be judged as it is just started
I have be looking forever for an si(self onsert) in harry potter as harry potter, any that i found are either crack fic like "of witch, wands and booze" or are drooped after few words
An decent non girl self insert that i found is of nevil longbottom that is also dropped at +200k words
Hope you do not drop this and please dont turn it in wish fullfillment (although they are really fun to read as long as they dont not become unreasonable) , try to give harry some challenges and dont forget the butterfly effect - monubnsl1999Royal Road★★★★ 4.0The obsession of the Mc seems illogical but I wonder how the author will continue with the story. Worth a read.
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I feel shame from having read this. Honestly, what was I expecting so long ago? A heartwarming romance about two adults, slowly turning into the perfect soap-opera? I don't know if that was my expectation, but I most certainly know that this wasn't what I got from the story.
Crude language, not that original of a start, and no other goal than wanting to be with her. Honestly, I cant say that I really enjoyed this that much. It's just the start of the first harry potter book but with some extra text in between. 4/5 from me - Finder18Royal Road★★★★ 3.5It story seems a bit forced and akward at times. I mean the girl is barely 11 years old and his is in his early twenties. also i expect bettter intelligence from him, sense he knows he has enemies.
- kossbossRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I am a lazy reveiwer but I thought I would also put in my encouragement to keep this story going!
- MattajRoyal Road★★★ 3.0I have read all 5 chapters today but the choice of the author in the last chapter made me lose any interest whatsover in the story. It was interesting, even though there were lots of "thoughts" and not dialogues, it was a new take on the story. I thought that I will have second fanfiction about Harry Potter universe on royalroadl that I enjoyed but removing part of the MC that we knew so far does not feel like a good choice.
For those that will continue reading it, I wish you that the author will make it an enjoyable read but I will not follow it because the only reason I have even attempted at HP fanfiction was because the MC was not from that universe (at least not entirely). - PhilosPubRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Harry Potter is going to be the main character. You do not get a new character. The annoying boy is not gone. He can sense magic and has a educational upgrade in medical and scientific knowledge that he doesn't understand. So nothing new under the Sun. Just a what if Harry, the worthless virgin, who runs at danger for no reason that actually makes sense, and acts like only he can save everyone is given knowledge and magic sense. I'm not bothering to continue reading but, if you actually like a kid that blindly jumps into fights with way more powerful and intelligent wizards. Only to discover that the author won't let him die like the moron he is. And gets praised for being such a idiot. This is still for you! Well written so far. Yet, sadly, still about a jerk who lives off his fame and tragic backstory. Relying on this to keep him safe. Never caring about laws, or the danger to his pawns- friends. Sad waste grammar and spelling is all I can see this as.