Harry Potter: and the Book Dweller

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Description

A young girl dies but as she lived a life loving the written word, her condensed imagination and knowledge are reborn as a spirit known as a book dweller. Book Dweller must find an ideal book to reside within in order to continue existing. This is the story of a Book Dweller that becomes a background character within the Harry Potter book series.

This fanfic is dedicated to my little sister Lauren. You may be gone but you're never forgotten

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2019

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.6/ 5.0
Followers
66
Views
22,940

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • DioDabaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is the best Potter World fan fic on Royal road!!! Most try to deviate from the plot or stick to close but the use of the background character and the book dweller skills is fantastic.
    I binge read the whole first book and I WANT MORE!!!
    Seriously fantastic job and cannot wait for more to come.
    P. S. Penny is the best :)
  • pineapplepepperRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    So, the author needs to learn how to separate text into reasonable paragraphs. 500 words per paragraph is NOT okay. And honestly, this read more like a script than a story to me. I was so suffocated (and bored) by the writing that I didn't even pay attention to the plot itself
  • CreestawlRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    It's not a bad start! It's really not. The Book dweller thing has potential. But that's just what this is--- a start. It reads like the summary a writer would write for himself to plan out the actual story.
    The voice in my head as I read this work sounds like an AI narrator: bland and emotionless. Let's get some senses in here. Let's imply and hint about emotions instead of straight up explaining them. I want to get to know Penny, but right now it hurts to read this, man.
    Get some editing done. Get some paragraphs separated out. Show, don't tell. And let me know when you're done, because I'd like to read it!