Harmony and Dissonance
Self-Published
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Description
"Are you the one who hurled five hundred trucks at me in my wet dream, you little piece of shit?” Alice calmly said.
Harmony and Dissonance. Two conflicting pitches. Two conflicting worlds.
One brings contrast and one brings unison.
Alice would think,Music theory? What's that? I'm running for my damn life from the damn Cartel, and you think I have enough time to... aimlessly wander around?!
Me too, man, me too. Btw, I'm the voice in your head so throw me to the back thanks ok bye
(Cover was done by a friend. Many thanks to him for granting permission to use it!)
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- MyWritingDisgustsMe
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 505
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- LunarKomboRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I understand the writer was just kind of going for it with their writing. But I found it kind of hard to figure out what was going on with the syntax getting in the way. I don't know if I could give it a star review in its current state. Which is a shame, because from what I could kind of follow, it sounded like they had some interesting action going on. Kicking it off with a bang and stuff. It was just the structural issues with the sentences kept me from being able to read it.
Additional note: Because I have to give a review number, I gave it a 4 star because in the world of online reviews, that is about average. Give it a try if you can follow it, because there looked to be a little promise with some polish. But I could not complete it.