Hannah Forteza and her Forte Persona

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

redron1028

• Chapter Twenty-five
  Jan 21, 2019
• Chapter Twenty-four
  Jan 7, 2019
• Chapter Twenty-three
  Dec 30, 2018
• Chapter Twenty-two
  Dec 23, 2018
• Chapter Twenty-one
  Dec 22, 2018
• Chapter Twenty
  Dec 20, 2018
• Chapter Nineteen
  Dec 19, 2018
• Chapter Eighteen
  Dec 18, 2018
• Chapter Seventeen
  Dec 17, 2018
• Chapter Sixteen
  Dec 16, 2018
• Chapter Fifteen
  Dec 15, 2018
• Chapter Fourteen
  Dec 14, 2018
• Chapter Thirteen
  Dec 13, 2018
• Chapter Twelve
  Dec 12, 2018
• Chapter Eleven
  Dec 4, 2018
• Chapter Ten
  Nov 24, 2018
• Chapter Nine
  Nov 9, 2018
• Chapter Eight
  Nov 8, 2018
• Chapter Seven
  Nov 7, 2018
• Chapter Six
  Nov 6, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Polaris ArchonRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The synopsis, well it was vague, for sure, but that mysteriousness made me take the first step into the story.
  The Grammar is near perfect, only with some wrong choices of preposition which I'm also guilty of, but that can be much tolerated.
  Characters. The first one seemed interesting enough, with the author really fleshing out their details since chapter 1.
  The problem is with the style. The fleshing out of characters is okay to be a little lengthy, but what made it unreadable was that all the character's actions are too detailed, that you start to yawn through half of the narrative. It's so detailed that, even the degree of which the first character turned the key, was identified.
  Sorry author-san I can only give you four stars, I hope you don't get discouraged by this. One piece of advice is don't over-describe actions. This novel will go a long way with a little tweak.