Grasping for the Heavens

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Description

What would you do if you were dragged into a new world? A new world with cars but not planes, no boats. No widespread internet. What would you do if you were reincarnated into this world? Not as a living thing, but as something that serves. A robot. A sentient robot. An artificial race. This is the story of one particular member of this species. His name? 1744174.But there's something wrong with the world... Something is happening... And there might be something wrong with 17441744...The mature tag is simply for blood and all that fun stuff. I mean there are people who can't deal with it...Link to the amazing person who made this cover: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCN3TTovVbR83B9YpbZqP-CQ/videos

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: DiamonFTW

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 24
Views: 27,039

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

caby202Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
PENGUIN-SAMA
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OH IM YOUR FIRST REVEIW?
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WoodsmanRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Let's start with character.
The main character is a person reincarnated into a sentient robot (also he's reincarnated into another world with magic and stuff, yeah.) The MC also knows mechanics and stuffs so that's convenient. aside from having the blandest personality ever of course.
Style
I don't really like having things pop up from nowhere.
like these
“We’re under attack! For all noncombatants, move to the bunkers!” Announces a voice.
What? Bunkers? Where? Ah… A floating map… Of course...
HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO IMPROVE THAT? HOW?!
Monsters usually have orichalium in their blood. Simply absorbing a monster will add the orichalium to you tank.
How are mana crystals even made? Maybe I should’ve listened…
Mana crystals are usually the hearts of monsters. Simply defeating one and absorbing the monster will add the mana crystal to your battery.
[Sudden interruption to point where MC goes or gets his information] [What does that bolded white text even? is that his memories? his robot functions? his robot friends? it doesn't explain.]
Also you use paragraphs without line breaks. make sure to use line breaks cause walls of texts sometimes makes it hard to read.
Grammar
Aside from some minor mistakes it doesn't really have anything too major to make you want to drop it.
Lastly, Story.
There really isn't much to judge as there's only 4 chapters but it's a guy who was reincarnated as a robot. (in a world of magic like i said before.)
and I don't really know what this story is gonna be.
There really isn't any plot holes (that I can detect, so far.) but yeah.