Grantale Online
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Description
Just another VRMMORPG themed light novel whereas the protagonist is playing the role of a Merchant.
The game’s features and contents will be discussed throughout the chapters unraveling together the rumored more-than-a-hundred character classes available for players, their unique play styles, skills and equipment.
The characters will be interacting with the elements of the game (and not issues out of the game) including quests and special events, duels, parties, guild wars, the usual things an MMORPG has adding a little bit of things it has not.
Join the protagonist and a lot of other players in their adventure in themedieval fantasythemedcrossed with cyberpunkvirtual game world of Grantale Online.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- angz_reed
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 9
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Community Reviews(1)
- halycon404Royal Road★★ 2.0I'm guessing the author is not a native english speaker. Sentences are stunted and language is stilted. Words often feel like they were pulled from a thesaurus; technically synonymous with what the author is trying to get across, doesn't fit in context of a sentence or paragraph. For instance, mischievous can mean something similar to ominous in the right context. The author just doesn't use the correct context. Odd word choices make the entire thing feel unsettled.
So far the story itself isn't bad structurally. A leads to B leads to C. Nothing comes out of left field or is unexplained. It's not a new or inventive story by any means, but it works. The writing is what brings it crashing down.
It's a good effort, just needs an editor. Someone to sit down and start writing lots of notes. Ideally a co-writer or teacher. Someone who's willing to sit down and go over the novel as a practical exercise in teaching english.