Grandpa Sweet Fist

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Description

Sweet Fist was a joke. He has no superpowers. He was merely a guy with some martial arts who dress up in a costume with a candy theme. He said stupid things like 'Sweet Dreams' and 'Choco Punch' when fighting and was an embrassment to the supervillain community. He has just been released after spending twenty years in prison.

Now he got a System, and the System informed the villain that he had many kids and even some grandchildren. The System want the villain to reunite with his family. Failure means death. Only one problem; Sweet Fist never knew he had kids. How was a bad guy supposed to reunite with a family he never knew existed?

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For edited version of the story, Grandpa Sweet Fist: Book 1 (A Proper Villain) & Grandpa Sweet Fist: Book 2 (A Villain's Core) are now available on Amazon. Please take a look to support the hungry author. Thanks!

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2020
Author: Ghostman

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 440
Views: 145,277

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Community Reviews(10)

librarysmilesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story really delves into the wibbly-wobbly areas of stories dealing with superpowered people.
When you scrape off the layer of "super", you find the nitty gritty of "this is how I make money" and "this is how I take care of my family".
This is the story of a down-to-earth guy who realizes that not everything is what it's cracked up to be.
tayco123Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Honestly I don´t want to spoiler something. It is a well written and funny Story, about a Grandfather who gets stronger, (re-)connects with his family, and builds up an honest villain career.
He has a System and learns Cultivation, but currently the major plot point is the building of his professional villain career.
Frequent Random ReaderRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
One of the best stories of the superhero/super villain genre. It is just that good. The style of the writing feels nice and the characters interactions feel real and important. His interactions with his family and his rediscovering of the world after the prison are really good to read, as you start to understand the world better together with him, a great example of the show/ don't tell.
So... yeah, it deserves full 5 stars. Hope the author keep writing and continuing with his good work.
peterfneillRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.
Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.
I will just repeat my earlier review as you need 200 words to create a advanced review
Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.
Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.
Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best. There are decent clifhangers on some of the chapters which are a bit short. But that is the only thing i do not like about the story.
Thats all i have to say a very decent story about a subject i enjoy. Its a interesting twist having someone without 20 years of the normal every day life experience suddenly back in society.
Great story i really like the main character and the way the first chapter builds into the story. The choice of powers and there development is also one of the best. I really enjoy supervillain stories and this one is one of the best
mythosinmysteryRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Felt it was a good story and did not like how some people were bombing the score. That's about it so I'm going to fill up the words now by saying sweet peas are not a valid candy and should be classified as a vegetable at best. ! ! Like ! !
Anon8Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Wholesome and funny story about an old villain who came into his powers late reconnecting with his family (whom he had no idea about) after his prison sentence. And he really is a villain, not an antihero or these villains with a heart of gold aka pirates who don't do anything. Easy 5 stars if not for the many grammatical errors. Worth a read.
SaphyronRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Not much has happened so far so can't go into too many details but the overall story is quite, and do give me a chuckle from time to time. Looking forward to seeing what is coming next.
Edit changed my score later on. Cliffhangers occur. Edited from 5 stars to 4 stars
MrHrulginRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's not unflawed, but I'm really enjoying it. It took a few chapters for it to find its stride and get past the exposition, but as Sweet Fist starts to interact with people more it's improving.
ArararaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Older villain MC gets out of jail in a superpower world, gets a cultivation system, and proceeds to start a villain organization from zero, and has to reunite with all the family he's never met in order to get rewards from the system. It reminds me of some chinese webfictions.
It's a pretty fun story, there are some interesting moments, but it's nothing too amazing. I'd usually rate it 4.5/5, but the english is pretty broken, so I will give it 4/5. All the mistakes really take away from how enjoyable the story is, but it's still mostly readable. (The recent chapters got quite better than the beginning ones, but there are still a lot of obvious mistakes. And in the beginning it was really rough)
Oh and also, the chapters are extremely short, waiting one week for 3 minutes of reading sounds a bit painful... But if you binge the story, it's okay
Leks DarkmindRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
first MC sets RULES of his reign - killing pedophile (yongest victim ~11yo).
then "he's my guy, he's a pimp that abducts, rapes, drugs mind controls victims. it's OK, he's bringin me my cut."
"controversal" author says. pure bull - can't come up with anything better.
other than that - mediocre. some lost words and letters, short'ish chapters, decent story and pacing.
but - drop