Gone
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This is the story of James Reide and his struggles. James is going to have to try and survive in a world that is no longer the one he remembers. See his triumphs and see his losses. Only Jame's will can keep him alive now.
Be forwarned that this is my first shot at writing. any constructive responses would be appreciated.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- CaptainMarvel21
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- 1HP_and_a_dreamRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0It's ok.
I guess.
I do enjoy it, its a bit different , not much but different. The release schedule (if it even exists) can test ones patience so if you want to binge read, just wait. - AyeAyeCaptainRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Yep I completely agree with KraKrayHere. It is quite messy. One example would be the paragraph where you introduces the capital of the kingdom, I do believe it should be added in the previous chap where you introduced the kingdom and such. Just like what Kray said, the beginning wasn’t really appealing enough for readers like me to get hooked on it immediately (It may not applied to others though, we all have different tastes).
The comedy is decent, though there are some are kind of a forced comedic dialogue like “cause you dead” I didnt not really expect that coming for the god himself seeing how he talks. I also do like the way you did for the “immortality” though it isnt really immortality seeing that Rake could die in some way making the bond break. In addition to that you guys seem to be determined in creating this story seeing how you guys try to improve and even make an illustration for this even though it is your first time. I like it. Well that’s that. Hope you guys will do good. Good luck aye. - KrayKrayHereRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Don't get me wrong I think it was quite a good attempt considering you are just freshmen (And your first time?) However Ill be honest this isn't really that appealing it didn't let me get hooked immediately. At the beginning it wasn't really engaging, you know? (For me atleast) Also I need to add the fact that your structure for your story is quite messy. Sorry guys. I would still read it though, and I will change my ratings though if it will be better than I expected (And if it is different from any of other isekai novels). Dont feel unmotivated after reading this please I am rooting for you guys haha. I am still looking forward for the next chapters :D