Golem Soul (CANCELLED)

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Description

War has always been a great boon to the scientific and magical communities, horrible deaths and incidental sacrifices aside the contest to win always leads to great advances. This is the tale of one of those sacrifices, a fisherman's son by the name of Michael.His body slain and his soul torn from it absorbed into the construct which killed him, Michael becomes the subject of an eccentric mage's experiment. Given the new name Gole, he becomes the first golem to possess a soul.Mature 15+Violence and Language

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Jackrum

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURESLICE OF LIFE

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
230
Views
2,499

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • ShadowWizardRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Nice story so far enjoying it very much interesting main character and i kinda like Nigel :D funny dude kills anything that annoys him fast and easy haha keep it up  :)
  • The WandererRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story by itself is pretty interesting and seems like it could go on for however long the author wants which is a good sign. Gole (as of chapter 31) still hasn't had a lot of character building, but that just leaves more room for the story to grow which is good considering it looks to be going in a very good direction. I know Jackrum didn't give this story an action tag, but it continually seems like the story is going in that direction and seeing how that there has been very little of it I can't say much on how he writes fighting scenes.
    My advice for Jackrum would be: Work on Gole's character, give us readers some reason to love and care about him and not just think of him as some naive village bumpkin stuck in a golem body.
    Keep up the good work and good luck!