Golem core

Self-Published

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Description

Alex's life changed when it ended. Hit by a car and reincarnated into the core of a golem and then discarded he finds himself in a new world he needs to find his place in and figure out what life as a golem means. Starting small maybe one day he will be great.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
815
Views
155,176

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • GeneticfreakRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Interesting premise and I like it so far. Hope you keep it up.
  • zero prRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I am waiting for the continuation.
    Because the MC is a golem nucleus, it can have numerous possibilities for its evolution.
    And the idea of MC wanting to become a blacksmith, as perhaps an initial occupation is very interesting. But I really want to be impressed, on how the story will be going forward.
  • CrazyGuyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Loving it so far, though I’m annoyed I found it so early and can’t just binge through hundreds of chapters. Ever since the dungeon core stories started coming out I’ve been waiting for something like this, keep up the good work.
  • sdeligarRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Enjoying the story so far and I look forward to seeing what the author has planned for the future. There are the occasional mistakes that one expects from any author without an editor and as such I suggest the same fix that all authors should use. Find someone to read each chapter before posting. They don't have to be any better with english than you are the point is just to have somebody notice the mistakes that you have over looked. Usually small things like teh and he/she that you brain will gloss over because it assume it already knows what has been written. It won't help with the more common grammar mistakes that 90% of people miss but will help with the other more noticable mistakes that might lead to some people complaining about in reviews.
  • The SpectatorRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story's concept is the main selling point. Otherwise the MC is bland. I enjoyed how he struggled at the beginning, but at the end, MC became an idiot. Only for the sake of plot progression. After you edit, make sure MC isn't sacrificing his character.
    Rate: 3.5
  • mioRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    2 stars, just for the idea. the story itself is horrifyingly bad!
    the mc is like a 5 year old kid, who is retarded, and can't make a logical decision if it would cost him his life!
    i have never read such an unlogical, badly made-up sequence of events in my life! and that's with the amount of bad books i've started alone reaching in hte hundreds!
    the idea was so good though... truly a sad day for readers everywhere.
  • GoldenfieldRoyal Road
    0.5
    dropped like the sack of shit story this is after reading the 12th chapter.
    Protagonist is retarded because being a good person means you cant be a smart person, literally hands himself over to be captured and enslaved without even bothering to try and understand things around him or use even the slightest semblance of intellect, thought handing himself over to the villagers for defending himself from a cat was a good idea.
    then he admits to being from another world to a gnome after he was caught, at what point is that a good idea when you know nothing? wakes up after awhile and gets utterly mindraped because plot and author ineptitude. author proceeds to defend mindrape in comments because the world has a history that the readers dont know! WOW! thats some smart writing right there!
    classic RR novel fuckup, aint no amount of retconning going to fix this, probably going to be dropped after a few weeks when he realises most of the readers quit on this one chapter.