Golem Armor: Building a Mech In Fantasy World.

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Description

He died of old age, surrounded by not people but machines built by his own hands. Join him as he reawakens in a fantasy world, once again, trying his best to reach his dream.

A different person molded by his new surrounding, Adrin had to adapt to survive.The journey towards it would be slow as he had to start from the bottom and build everything from scratch. He had to adapt to using unfamiliar tools to recreate the things he had built, or using science to get ahead.

The world, however, wouldn’t open a path for him to travel. Monsters big and small, people kind and cruel would stand in his way whether he liked it or not.

Author’s note:English is not my first language.For young adults (light adult content, not romance focused).A remake/revamp of an original story.It will take a while before pieces are put together.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: psyMeat

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

meddler88Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a great story that I can see myself reading for as long as there are chapters. A lot of the other reviews state that the MC is lacking or it is all about sex. I disagree because I have read to chapter 42 and sex is not the main focus. The world does show that when you can die almost every day due to the dangers surrounding you, sex becomes causual and possibly a life saving action in attaching yourself to someone. The MC does have sex but he refuses to more often then anything and limits himself to only a few women hence the harem tag.
Also, the mc is not a bad mc, I say this because I have seen him grow and start to recognize the major influence his past life is playing on him in the latest chapters. All I can say to the critics is to give the story a chance and you will not regret it.
Lastly if you are a grammar n*zi then do not read stories on a site known for budding authors. It is like you going into a flower shop with extreme pollen allergies then getting mad at the shop owner for your allergic reaction, just silly.
gonflickRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Great but man need to move past the fear of betrayal from women yeah their hypergamas but thats what paternity tests are for good redpill stuff but too much fear tovreally sell it well.Great but man need to move past the fear of betrayal from women yeah their hypergamas but thats what paternity tests are for good redpill stuff but too much fear tovreally sell it well.
Dougulas KaienRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
When I started reading, I didn't know what to expect. A villager undergoes a special/gruelsome ritual to awaken his spiritual guide, and it helps him to unlock a system of progression. It takes a while to understand the village's oddities, but the MC slowly increases his power and eventually leaves the village -- to discover a whole new world of magi nobles and his OP magic powers.
Notice that I haven't mentioned anything about armor or golem. It feels odd to see them in the story title, while the story has no obvious relationship with either element. There is some sex, but they are mainly fade-to-black rather than explicit in nature. More like a R rating at the movie theater than X rated. But your mileage may vary.
TitaniumElephantRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like the novel, the MC is intelligent but not very wise, he sometimes seems very dim by the very choices he makes but he also seems to realize it, so I take it that something will be done about it. I like the way the system is easy to understand and one can even make certain deductions just based on the information that's been provided. The MC is very flighty though and instead of him to max his skill before moving on to new ones, he kind of foolishly just acquires more and more...I don't like MCs that develop this way...I like the versatility of having many skills but whats the point if you dont make them as strong as they can be. There is no rush that has been alluded to or mentioned, so why the hell is he acting like all his knowledge will vanish if he doesnt use it.
Airforce821Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
while some parts of the story aren't that clear it's awesome overall. The story has decent world building however I like the magic system the most so far. Another thing I noticed is you never really gave anything concrete about his past life which is slightly irritating ,but overall this is a good story.
drizinho0Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The history is great and so is the way it is writen, just half a star less because of the MC history, got a heartache there and some willpower so refocus on the history at hand, good work author you deserve it.
the history can catch your attention easily and the MC is realy good at what he does as he really mesh with the history realy well and don't feel out of place, and the heartache.
the history itself is excellent no noteworthy errors(if i found one at all). all in all, i recomend it, but go prepared as the hisory will catch you and get your feels, pretty warning comming here, so engoy!
CkelltepRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Too dark for 5 star. Good story. its too dark in the begining, but if you continue reading then you will be interested. Strange relationship and enemy everywhere.
Author, do you happen to suffer from paranoia or do you have trauma?
Sorry for grammar, English is not my first language.
Shadowbinder1992Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Enjoyed the read, can see it being more. Has potential to grow and develop. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
At times struggles to convey a clear meaning.
Has potential to be fleshed out.
Enjoyed it. Enjoyed it Enjoyed it.
Give it a chance and have a read. You may like it and continue to enjoy.
mf_aureliusRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
It's a good story, but it needs work. The MC is way too over powered and seems very contradictory at times. His backstory also needs a lot more filling in, as he definitely feels like a Gary Stu with little to no motivation or reason for existing Who was just inserted into the scenery by an ROB.
Aside from the problems with the main character, the side characters also feel a bit one dimensional. This applies specifically to the "romance" scenes, where all of the action seems quite dry. I think if you want to include explicit scenes, they should at least be at this standard of the rest of the story. Otherwise, the story flows better if you just cut them out entirely.
As a whole, dialogue feels stilted in the awkward. Maybe it's due to the main character having in a social, hermetic, misanthropic perspective/personality; whatever the reason, the conversations between characters need a revamp.
3.5/5. Solid story. Keep writing.
OwlishRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Maybe the grammar has been corrected since posting, but it seems pretty ok to me. There are some weird word choices and phrases though.
Plotwise, we're now at a third or fourth location [village, traveling, school, new town]. Multiple sexual encounters. Multiple other women lusting over the MC. Everything is kind of disjointed.
The main answer to Why Build A Mech is Because It's Cool. There's a secondary In Case I Get Hit With Antimagic. We don't know if such a thing exists, but it probably does.
So, not bad, just not really good either.