Gods of Tartarus: Benevolence

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Description

Michael Dale Lemos, you average computer hardware technician had a childhood wrought with bullies and social isolation. Now as an adult, he just started getting his life together, starting to find true happiness, when it is all ripped from him. Forced into a role he never wanted, cast into a world he didn't know, he has to do his best hide his identity so he can survive. He will slowly gain allies and work to break the vilified image of what he has become, the Demon-Lord.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Ry-Usen

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 55
Views: 67,876

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OrigamiKnifeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The start is a bit awkward and the dialogue is occsionally a bit stilted but I admire that the author is consistently trying to "show" us what is being said. Too often I see authors resorting to "telling" us what has occurred. Often writing an entire chapter in which multiple characters are supposedly engaged in conversation without a single line of dialogue. I would take a poor-mediocre "show" over the best written "tell" any day of the week.