Godly Marine: Killed

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Staff Sergeant Michael Kahale, Marine Corps Mechanic and Son of Athena, was murdered. Annabeth Chase is determined to find out who did it and why. She, along with Percy Jackson, Grover Underwood, and Clarisse La Rue, infiltrate NCIS where they team up with NCIS Agents Leroy Gibbs, Anthony DiNozzo, Timothy McGee, and Ziva David. Complete

Crossover Fanfiction between NCIS and Percy Jackson & The Olympians

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Status
Completed
Year
2022
Author
scarpool

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ACTIONMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSMYSTERY

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4.8/ 5.0
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1
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4,872

Chapters(13 total)

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  • precinctomegaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    When I happened upon - by total chance - a Percy Jackson/NCIS crossover fanfic, my first assumption that it would be hilariously bad.
    I was pleasantly surprised to be wrong.
    For those who are fans of both, the story is set before Camp Halfblood finds out about Camp Jupiter, but probably only just as there are strong hints about it in the narrative (although they aren't directly relevant to the plot). The story is also set before Ziva and Tony leave the team.
    When a demigod is in trouble, he turns to the help of Camp Halfblood and his half-sister, Annabeth Chase. But by the time Annabeth can react, he is already dead and, as he was a serving US marine, NCIS, Leroy Jethro Gibbs and his team are on the scene.
    Annabeth, Percy, Clarisse and Grover go undercover as NCIS agents to track down the monsters responsible for their brother's death.
    The author does a remarkable job of capturing the voices and styles of both settings and mixing them in a story that ends up being... astonishingly persuasive as potentially canonical to both.
    The story itself is, perhaps, over-intricate and there are some gaps in the motivations of characters that aren't fully explored, but one could argue that that, too, was consistent with the source material! It is, thought, deftly handled with the two universes crossing over and separating smoothly and appropriately, particular at the point of the denouement.
    The author also isn't afraid to consistently lampshade the question of the obvious youth of the demigods.
    I would say that the story could benefit from a read-through as spelling and grammar are occasionally wayward, but more along the lines of typos than of actual ignorance. The characters, of course, aren't original so no points for invention. But they are faithfully reproduced and I especially enjoyed Abby's response to meeting Clarisse - blink and you'll miss it, but it struck me as a great illustration of the author's clear affection for both characters.
    In summary, I did not waste my t