God Transported me to a Fantasy World with my Guns

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[Dealubies][The New World][Our hero, the greatest assassin of his age died in his old world, killed in a car crash with the dreaded truck kun because of a mistake God made.][Feeling guilty for his mistake, the God of Earth contacted his old friend, the God of Dealubies and asked if he could transmigrate him to his world since bringing someone straight back from the dead is against the godly laws.][The God of Dealubies being the kind, benevolent and allround awesome God that I am…. I mean he is, accepted his friend's request happily and transferred our hero to the world of Dealubies.][Now in this new fantasy world and free to start a new life, how will our hero choose to live this second life of his.][Adventure, danger, excitement, grief and maybe even romance await our hero in his new world.]

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Sweeper

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 84
Views: 73,439

Chapters(97 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

BlackShadRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I tried, I really did. The premise of the story is solid, an assassin gets isekaied into a fantasy world but he has his guns. The problems are mostly grammatical and formatting in nature.
Author, I posted a couple comments with some ideas for how to fix the grammatical and formatting issues so I hope you are able and willing to go back and re-write the chapters to fix those.
As for the story itself, I only got to chapter 17 so I may have missed some, but it is very simple and lacks a lot of depth. Also there is a "twist" of sorts around chapter 16 that makes zero sense except to just be something new.
markperfect35Royal Road
★★ 2.0
Reviewed at chap 45 just being honest no offence to author.
We its very basic and to the point. The author is either not an experienced writer, not a native English speaker but if they are most likely have adhd or dyslexia. Any way they are trying so points for that ....
As for the story it has promise but like I said its basic and to the point. It does not flow properly the mc is a psychotic who respects women enough to not force himself on them but still wants to bang nearly everyone. Leading me to believe the author is not very experienced himself as the women that are attracted to the mc are almost wet at the sight of them. Also the fire arms . Author has little to no experience with them. Big gripe 50 cal to the head. It would almost destroy it . Please ref one of the many gun YouTube channels that use many life like targets that simulate actual bullet wounds example ( Kentucky ballistics) dude specialises in high calibre weapons.
That's all for now