god Dimension

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

rhino

• parasyte vol 2 chapter 1
  May 8, 2019
• Characters Update vol 1
  Jan 6, 2019
• intermission traning and next world
  Jan 6, 2019
• Eden no Ori vol 1.5 Chapter 1-4
  Jan 6, 2019
• Eden no Ori vol 1.5 Chapter 1-3
  Jan 1, 2019
• Eden no Ori vol 1.5 Chapter 1-2
  Dec 21, 2018
• Eden no Ori vol 1.5 Chapter 1-1
  Dec 21, 2018
• intermission 4-3
  Dec 20, 2018
• intermission 4-2
  Dec 20, 2018
• intermission 4 -1
  Dec 20, 2018
• intermission 3-3
  Dec 20, 2018
• intermission 3-2
  Dec 12, 2018
• intermission 3-1
  Dec 12, 2018
• intermission 2-3
  Dec 7, 2018
• intermission 2-2
  Dec 7, 2018
• intermission 2-1
  Dec 1, 2018
• intermission 1-3
  Nov 30, 2018
• intermission 1-2
  Nov 23, 2018
• intermission 1-1
  Nov 16, 2018
• points vol 1
  Nov 16, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• AscendantRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  the story is good other than grammar.....did you realize your synopsis is cut off?
• ShinnnRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Good mc. Interesting story.
  Spoiler: Spoiler
• CrywolfsevenRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I understand not being fluent in English it’s a very tough language and normally I just give it a pass when an author has less then stellar grasp on the English language since their English is much better then I am in any other language. However this is a rather good story that is honestly being ruined by grammar. I am four chapters in and get a head ache if I read more then one chapter at a time without taking a break. There are just a lot of missing words almost like it was translated using google translate.  I don’t mean to complain but like I said it’s a good story but the author desperately needs to go back over it and clean up some of the early chapters. I think it could have a huge following if it was for some truly awful grammar issues, again I am only on chapter 4 so that might change later but that’s how it stands to me now.
  I will try and keep reading it as I do enjoy the story so far I just think you could have so much more if you went back over it now that you have had some time to grow as a writter and clear up some of the head aches causing issues. I also think it might be a good idea to use more descriptions instead of just using the same one over and over to describe something. I mean there was a chapter where the MC fought a “big wild boar”. That phrase was used three times in one sentence then used each and everytime they wanted to refer to it during the rest of the chapter.
  I do want to thank you for putting forth your time and effort for us for free so I don’t want to sound like I am complaining about you. In fact I am hoping this is more of a constructive criticism instead of insulting. You have a interesting theory you just need to clean it up a bit and make it shine.
• LonerTillEndRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I hope the Author's Grammer will improve soon(Mine Too). But I applaud you for your courage and guts to create a story and post it with this many mistakes. Something a perfectionist like me will never do. So, Congrats, I hope you Continue :)
• Shadow8tingRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  It is ok. Adds too much stuff too soon. It also fails to add some nessesary information that it then adds later on. The grammar leaves much to be desired but it is understandable. Overall if the flow of the story and the gramar was gixed this would be an amazing story.
• ShadowbladeRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  but please edit the chapters with better grammar its taking away from the story i couldnt get past chapter 4 without having a head ache. not putting you down for it but only my suggestion