Goblin story

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2022

Author

Etherius_Drake

• 1-8
  Aug 2, 2022
• 1-7
  Jul 20, 2022
• 1-6
  Jul 5, 2022
• 1-5
  Jul 1, 2022
• 1-4
  Jun 30, 2022
• 1-3
  Jun 17, 2022
• 1-2
  Jun 2, 2022
• 1-1
  May 26, 2022
• 1-0
  May 19, 2022
• You might go crazy
  Jul 6, 2022
• snipins a good job mate
  Jun 30, 2022
• Im an assassin not a psycho
  Jun 27, 2022

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• LireRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  A great little tale about goblins and their way of life!
  This fiction's off to a pretty good start! I decided to write a review for this, since I found it strange that nobody else has done so.
  Anyway, let's go!
  Style(4.5★):
  It's pretty simplistic, some may even call it clunky. There are also quite a bit of redundancy as a style choice.
  It's not bad, though. Rather, I think the style suits a story about goblins really well.
  Just imagine the narrator talking in a goblin-like voice, like I did, and you'll like it.
  I took half a star off since others might not be like me. They might hate this kind of style.
  Story (4.5★):
  It's still pretty early on in the story to judge it too much, but in the few chapters I've read, it's been pretty solid so far.
  I'm gonna give it a 4.5 for now, but this may improve in the future!
  Grammar (5★):
  Doesn't really take much to get a five for grammar from me. I pretty much understood everything, so all is well. There were a few minor errors, but none of them are big. Probably just cases of finger fumbling or words getting leftover from changing sentence structures.
  As a fellow writer, I know this more than most people.
  Character (5★):
  This is a story about goblins. So naturally, most of the characters are goblins as well.
  If you expect tons of emotional development from goblins, then I don't think you really know what the hell goblins are.
  I didn't come here expecting those.
  Still, traces of some emotional development is there. Eavh goblin has mini-story of its own.
  Their names are also pretty simple, so they're easy to remember.
  I remember laughing about how "a goblin picked up a helmet and put it on his head, so he became Helmet Goblin."
  Anyway, I liked the little buggers. 5 stars.
  Overall (4.5★):
  The overall score, to me, isn't really the average of the above four ratings. It's a measure of my reading experience as a whole.
  Reading this was really fun. Which would normally warrant me giving a five in the overall, but there were a few minor