Girl with the Golden Eyes

Self-Published

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Description

Cyril was the sole child of an international power couple Edward and Madin. Because of interfamily fighting, Cyril was horribly injured and had to remain in a coma because of the pain she felt when she was awake. Eventually, they found that she could connect with their family via technology that such as Full Dive Technology that captured the nerve signals. Years go by and her father had created a virtual game around her, but her body eventually failed and she chooses to end her life while she was still her.

However, life deemed that she would get a second chance to live and she gets reincarnated in the world she and her parents created - 5,000 years later...Note:Please bear in mind that I amnota professional, or anyone with any higher learning. Simply someone who found a passion to write.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Meloncholy

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 710
Views: 22,552

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

raycantwoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
interesting storry. the author has restarted this story 3-4 times already but it is still worth reading
RedThunderRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A "Girl with the Golden Eyes" is a well written novel which manages to pull the reader deeper and deeper into the story, wanting to know what is going to happen next.
Both the story following the mc and
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Characters in the real world eg her dad
are both extremely interesting and intriguing, making it difficult to know which one you want to read., when you want both at once Solution: gain the ability to read multiple chapters simultaneously.
Style is enjoyable and I have not noticed any problems with it.
Story is amazing and light hearted, but at the same time also dark and not for the light hearted. Be warned:There are some very sad moments and it may make you cry.
There are some grammatical errors, but nothing huge or something that takes away from the story too much.
Characters feel real and fleshed out: both the mc and
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people outside the VR.
I recommend this to anyone who enjoys Isekai, OP characters and grimdark.
Review as up to chapter 11.
UlbertRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Let it be known. When you asked us to go over to this website, called Royalroad, I was instantly hit by scepticism. I heard of it once before, when I read a fiction called "everybode loves large chests" on there, but the rest just kind of seemed weird and/or bad. But my standards had sunken and I just craved for content. And then Ashen steps in and asks us whether we would like to check this fiction out. And I did. And it changed. A lot. But now, after all of this, the series seems to be on hold. And you're saying, you want to rewrite it...
I am angry. But I am glad that its you doing it.
This story is dark, gloomy and gritty. And you know how to fucken equip your characters. They come with everything you need, to be reading this for days. So go on. I'll wait for the Xth rewrite. And keep your morale up! I believe in you!
heiv123Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Love it all and can't wait for the second season! ................
71M073JRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Two chapters.
That's apparently how much of a story you need to bring someone to tears. Starts a bit awkwardly - In Medias Res - but that hints to a well prepared prologue.
This story, while as of writing this (after rewrite) only 2 chapters, has some serious potential. Here's to keeping it amazing!
Lil Smurf CatRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
If you're expecting a happy go lucky isekai with a harem of big titty wamen and where everything works out through the power of friendship or MC plot armor.
Then this ain't the story for you chief.
Its dark
Its gritty
And most of all, it's a fascinating story. Where I want to know what happens next.
Drink your corn syrup, AntichristRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story is so far engaging, despite a few grammatical error here and there. Pls keep it up! Take as long as you want, however. (I'm still here, suffering form the fact that you rewrote all of your stories like twice or something. My monthly or something dose of drugs, come on! Hopefully you dont stop writing, though; it's really pleasing to the brain(?))
MilandaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It’s an odd mix of dark/depressing and overpowered and whimsical. While the world itself is very gritty (and sexual assault is the common marker of an evil noble) and dark, it still has a lot of positive moments. The MC is unapologetically Overpowered and the world seems intriguing through her eyes, new and alive and full of potential.
I’m hoping to see a lot less of the dark and gritty and a lot more of the wrecking everything for fun. But only time will tell.
MyriadRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's an interesting spin to the whole "isekai" into a VR game. The intro is nice and touching.
But as you get further, the story starts being disjointed and feels harder to follow. There is a jump in time or events that are poorly explained, too many switch of point of view, etc.
It seems like the author has a rough idea where to take his story, but doesn't know how to get there.
Grammar overall is good, but there is some mistakes that could easily be fixed with a bit of rereading.
YabintRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I'm enjoying the premise of this story and look forward to seeing where A s h e s takes us with their vision. The descriptions are good however the story lacks in how it flows, there is a lot of word repitition and sometimes it feels that sentences are moved acound in paragraphs without the author going back to the beginning to ensure that the final draft has a natural cadence.
As others have said, this work would greatly benefit from a second pair of eyes going over it.