Ghoster
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The virtual world is everything. With sensors, computer chip implants, contact lenses, and an internet connection you can also live in the virtual world! Don't worry about how you don't look like a model. The virtual world can fix that. It can make it so that everyone sees you how you see yourself! With job leveling and virtual pets, everything is better in the virtual world! Come to an Insinc office today to get equipped to enter the virtual world.
A series of short stories set in an augmented reality/virtual reality world.
This story is posted on Wattpad, Inkitt, and Royal Road. If you are not reading on one of these location, you are reading a pirated version and you can read it for free on Royal Road.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Anehalia
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- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 6
- Views
- 862
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Let's start off with this being a series of shorter stories, most of them having some kind of personal experience being the background. It's a great way for inspiration and really did set the content into a new format for me. I have nothing bad to say against it overall, style and grammar clearly having been spent some time on. While characters might not have been fully formed, I feel that's more due to the relative shortness of the stories more than anything
5/5 from me - Erikson LegaspiRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5As a non-native english speaker, I like how simple and easy it is to follow the story, your style is pleasing to me because of that. I got confused on the first dialogue of the first story but I could be the one who has the fault since I am not used to reading on a laptop screen. I like the dialogue in the second one, the exchanges felt like two siblings snarking on each other and their interactions and demeanor really showed the lighter tone of the story.
Your grammar is superb, I assume you're a native english speaker, if not, I am very impressed with your fluency.
I was expecting somekind of payoff in the first story since there is so much build up but story was interesting and immersive especially in the second one. I don't know much about litRPG so I do not have very strong opinions on it yet but it was written very well that it seemed like it was an entirely different universe from the first one.
Your characters were beautifully done, you gave enough details to give them a distinct look but not too much that it seemed an overkill on details.
Overall it was quite enjoyable and I will ceratinly borrow some patterns and construction from you to include in my own writing. You have been very helpful.