George of the Dungeon

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

George is having a really rough day.

He was in his room, and then he wasn't. Where he is now, he doesn't know, but it's cold and damp and probably underground and there's a bunch of spiders and stuff that want to kill him. Or not.

And all he has is a mostly empty book.

Yeah, George is having the time of his life.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Necamijat

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 210
Views: 42,385

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

A.BelRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story was engaging, making you want to read the next chapter. The prologue was decent, though a bit too long winded and could have been made more streamlined.
One big flaw was the lack of emotion you'd expect from someone dropped into a dimly lit cave with a dog sized spider. It read more like cooking instructions, rather than actions interwoven with emotion from a frantic human beset by something so unknown and horrifying. I'd be breathing hard, eyes wide, heart pounding, maybe even screaming and crying like a little girl for mommy. There was not backstrory intervowen to show whether he'd be this chill in a dark cave with giant spiders, like a Navy Seal.
BansheePandaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Provisional 5 star until more chapters are out. A little dry, a little sarcastic; the tone is right up my alley.
For now, looking forward to where this goes. Good luck, George!
OrionXVRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Let's see, the story is fine - it is quite interesting and delightful with pleasant cliffhangers. So every time you finish a chapter you are left wanting for more. This and the tone of mild sarcasm has compelled me to read everything up to the latest chapter.
There are no glaring grammatical errors and the sentences are easy to read. The descriptions are good, however, the lack of vivid details is something that I don't like - or it is just me.
Despite the lack of feelings of the MC at certain instances, it is a great book. Something worth your time.