GENESIS PRIME- New Beginning

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For five millennia human kind flourished military technology advanced. In the whole milky way galaxy they found no equal, only but primitive life form to enslave planets system and star system to conquer. The greed of mankind set their sight on the neighbouring galaxy called andromeda only found tragic defeat from the first campaign and both galaxies destroyed.

Traveling to the  farthest edge of the universe to escape the inevitable racial demise escaping from unknown threat.Crashed in a habitable planet, in a star system that they called GENESIS PRIME, would the last survivor humans driven to extinction or would they strive again just like their primogenator did.

This is analternative universewhere Nazis won the WW2 and the continuous warring guided them to progress in an advanced superior military technology, which led the Fuhrer Supremacy colonising the whole Earth and by the Empire's ruling, humans dominated the whole Milky Way Galaxy.

Warning:This is a fiction alternative universe. // /  //  / / /   This novel carries a disclaimer about the characters bearing no relation to living personsand does not necessarily reflect those of the historical figures themselves, or other fictional characters. Any similarities between the people, dialogs, event, or plot is purely coincidental. I do not in any way endorse, condone or encourage any racist/fascist behaviour, or activities associated with Nazism, theNSDAPas well as Neo-Nazi organisations.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2017

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.9/ 5.0
Followers
14
Views
15,561

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • Gravity@Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A good story so far, good world creation. Multiple character setup, interaction with different kinds of races are superb. Makin entirely new civilisation for different kinds of species.the author is imaginative, a guy with experience in life. Loving his sex scenes funny and full of fantasy.
    updating in the future changes.
  • MarvelFan0055Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I will rate this as how people should rate first amateur novels. The story has potential I do believe it, just one suggestion for author you shouldn't rush if you find yourself stuck on something.
    As what you have stated somewhere in your chapter English is your fourth language, I dont really care about it, but having no editor is sometimes a NO go, but hey we are all learning. If you think you can do it by yourself and you dont find it bothering you keep it up.
    Having to many genres has ups and downs.
    Testing variaties and styles how you write is a check though the story is kind of everywhere in some chapters but I like how you line it.
    Im not overrating I was gonna give you 3 for grammar and 3 for style but I believe in process of learning if you put a bit of effort on it. Overall score should be four, I will be merciful on my rating. :P
    That is all for now I will update my review in the future if some changes happened, Goodluck and have fun.