Genesis (A Short Story)
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Description
The story is about the Humany race, who had to leave their planet due to a collision between two superplanets that caused the Big Bang. They had to evacuate using an aircraft carrier and ultimately found a new blue planet that was perfect for them. They landed on the planet and explored it, finding a stretch of green plants, a clear liquid flowing around them, and creatures with four legs and wings roaming around. They decided to stay on the planet and began building a civilization that became more advanced over time. They named the planet Eden and built schools, hospitals, and other infrastructure necessary for their survival. They overcame the challenges posed by the new planet and built a new society that was thriving and prosperous.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Siohkun
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 330
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- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0This was a bit interesting, the prose and the build up were rather basic, but this might step on some readers toes because the story of Genesis is well-known and this takes it as inspiration to explain the origin of humanity differently. I don't think it crosses a line, but reimagining religious texts in such a way is a bit touchy for some people. This literally removes divine origin and God to give a different version of Genesis.
To be clear the 3 stars comes from the poor description of how the spacefaring, through essentially a seed ship is given. The prose works for the most part, but the telling aspects made it difficult to get immersed into the story and the awkwardness of some of the narration kept pulling me out.