Genesis: A Dungeon Core Story

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Description

Within the lands of the Realm a new dungeon stirs to life. It's path is changed by the presence of a dead body and a wealth of books that opens its mind to the wider world. Frustrated by it's own rooted nature it seeks to understand the world around it, and even find a way to travel to places unseen. Unknown to it, the world is in a critical state, and plans centuries in the making are resting on it's core. For it's unique nature gives it a chance to say no to the powers that be, and they don't like it when rejected.

NOTE: This story uses AI to help with grammar and punctuation.

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Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: Eibon Ethos

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Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(4)

Yuuka neeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i do enjoy the progress of the dungeon to learn and yearn for more knowlege, i like how the dungeon just takes time and dosent force things fast, i didnt find any grammatical errors, the story stays strong and is understandable, i do recomend 10/10.
also theres bit of ignoring living beings pain.
tikiiriaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
It was a interesting world and story. The writing style worked well. The dungeons method of learning was interesting if a bit ruthless. The world building was well done and it wasn't horribly drawn out with fluff. I took a half of a star off for some of the grammar mistakes. I would really enjoy seeing a golem slap a dragon, or the faces of anyone watching a golem slap a dragon!
Rona JohnstonRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I enjoyed this story but wanted to more about the five kingdoms in the dungeon. Also, would have liked to know more about the rebellion. I am looking forward to more from this author. I usually read longer stories like He Who Fights with Monsters, Defiance of the Fall, and Wheel of Time.
Ult the DreamerRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's fairly nice but it suffers from a few things.
The System and the Demon and the grand plan are all interesting, but the constant manipulation makes the characters seem to lack agency. They struggled to free themselves but with the Demon's manipulation it's impossible to really tell if they were successful.
Then the end. It's good, but sad and confusing. It feels weird. I'm not even sure if the humans were real or if they're simulations that are being converted from magic to reality. Also don't know if Sara dies.