General's Call

Self-Published

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Description

Zen had never cared that his real life was screwed up, and he was estranged from his family that only cared about money anyway. After the death of the only person that he truly cared about, he ran away from his family biding his time till he got his inheritance from his grandfather. Wanting to forget his past and the family that only holds bitter memories he joins a revolutionary game called General’s Call. A game that has a mixture of strategy, combat and economy that is sometimes more treacherous than the real world.

As he starts his new life and runs away from his old one. He tries to escape his family and an arrogant rich kid and a ex employer, that can’t get over their grudge of being insulted by somebody that is beneath them.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Darkreavers

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 173
Views: 34,043

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

ShuuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The dream of living in a rts is strong with this one. A breath of fresh air from the normal adventure novels I usually read.
Winged ThingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Readers: This is not a hidden gem its a paragon of potential and with time and a proper PR incredible things will come of it.
Authour: If you keep writing and stay true to your concept and play it well then your work is going to exceed pretty much every vrmmo on this site. You're going well and I for one will eagerly await each next update. Fight on! You got this.
Zero_01Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
seems like a really good story, i especially like the fact that chose to forsake a large town for bounesses, so it would make sence that other players are better then him/more advanced, rather than alot of novels who have the mc as overpowerd and the best and yet other people are some how better then them befcause plot.
ps is there an ETA on your return
RazinalRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a Kingdom building story that really is worth having a place in your reading list.
BoogieRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is unique and because it seems like a building type story, but I wonder who the nemesis is. It is drawn out but it looks like it is moving now. I like the chracter of a rich kid trying to not be seen as a wealthy punk. He has a concious it seems, and he is trying hard to keep to it.
Sex scenes: I like how you did it and made it part of the story but not the focus of it. To many times the writers can't seem to walk that line. The fact that he has to create heirs, makes it actual purpose and not jsut having sex fo sex. It makes it less carnal and more reasonable.
The writer's need to check his grammar is important, but he does correct it after he is notified about it most of the time. He doesn't take a proud stance, and that actually is refresshing. Plus we all know before publication on amazon or where ever he will publish it. He will probably go through a full edit anyway. So I just enjoy, because he does try to do a admirable attempt at it.
I personally worry about the broadness of the story, but many writers do this. Then they narrow it out after creating a foundation.
My favorate character: Bena the AI is by far my favorate character. I mean she is a smart ass, but she typically does it for reasons. I wonder if there weill be some reomatic envolvment with her in the future. A very broad minded partner to be sure.
It is a good start and I look forward to the continuation of the story. 100+ pages isn't bad for a new writer.
HamsterDesTodesRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
A Kingdom builder/harem novel. Decent pace on the actual building, completely screwed up pace on the character bonding or perhaps their introduction. People hop into his bed (where he oh so graciously assures us readers he will do "his duty and produce heirs" ...) or into critical oaths with the MC that seems rather forced at times.
XhallyRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
The grammar on this fiction is frankly atrocious. There are constantly mistakes in punctuation and the distinction between words like there, their, and they're. It severely undermines the quality of the novel.