Gathering Storm

It has been two decades since the kingdom of Ralithien suffered a devastated invasion from its enemies across the Evenessian sea, but ever since, times have been peaceful, and its inhabitants have grown soft. Now a new threat with unbreakable resolve looms over the horizon, and the royal house must scramble to prepare a disorganised realm whose nobility is more concerned with petty fights and greed than the good of its subjects, while an overzealous church spreads its malign tendrils disguised as divine salvation.

Things to consider: Hi! this is my first story and I have no prior writing experience, so I welcome all kinds of feedback with open arms.Also,English is not my first language, soIapologize if the prose is sometimes convoluted.