Gate keeper

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

The story starts out with a young girl who is condemned and has to guard the Gate. By the gods order she and many others before their last breath were put to work as guards for these forbidden gate worlds. Can she escape to live her life or will she forget even how her face looks like? The masks given to them are to make sure no one recognizes them. Yet they are also forgetting who they even are except their names and crime.

Can they remember their memories? Their pasts? Or can they escape their fate of being guards for the rest of their lives?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
SnowDemon

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.5/ 5.0
Followers
25
Views
61,589

Chapters(65 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • J of 22Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I do not do reviews. So don't expect much.
    Your story is original and unique, is quite good. But the only thing I have against your story is you try to give out too much information at one time not even focusing on your MC very much. That gives you lot of background information it is in my opinion to much information, to much to fast. I have been reading your story for awhile now I don't want you to leave it I can tell you put a lot of thought into and want to express everything, but it seems to me you are not even focusing on your MC and is focusing on everything and everyone else. With that said I like to point out that your gate gardens only have memories of there crimes how do they know everything else? It even seem that you do not even have a plot to your story. It seems you gave your characters and background information that all.  I am new at this and is my first review the reason I even did it was because I saw you keep put your time into your story and no one is even leaving you a review and giving you feedback on it. This is not a expert review or anything it is just mine.