Gandon and Ilmur a saga

Self-Published

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Description

This is a story about two best friends that become deadly enemies, a mix between a short story and a fairy tale

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2022

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
884

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • GeorgeLucasnotRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    As i said in the title, the name is damn good and I was already ready to give you 5 stars( only russians will understand), then I read it and found some things I didn't really like. Here's the one. Every book needs introduction in the world, it has to have a main character who  so reader can  pity, applaud to and cheer for, but u started it as if it was a retel of a book, not actual one. Work some things out and it all will be good. Overall not bad for the first time