Game of the Gods

Self-Published

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Description

In the world of Arcane, a world ruled by the rules of the three sisters.

Where Titans slumber beneath the surface and would be better forgotten by the world.

On whose surface monster races fight against the races of the gods for supremacy, or simply put, for their own survival.

Champion against champion, god against god, pantheon against pantheon, human against human, elf against elf.

But in this story we follow some individuals who live in this new time of a new game of the gods.

Always one chapter per week 4:00 - 08:00 PM CEST.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Mikka Shaman

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 70
Views: 59,617

Chapters(81 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

digi97Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I'm no expert, but here are a few tips:
- the plot is intriguing but a reader will soon lose interest in the story if the main character, who's one day supposed to become a badass demon, is still an infant after 12 chapters. So I really suggest to up the pace...by a lot.
this is not the first story I've read who falls into the mistake of trying to world-build too much too soon, and more often than not they all end up on hiatus either because they've lost inspiration or simply because they get lost in their own story and finds managing all the meat they've placed onto the fire simply too hard of a task.
-The grammar is fine, there's way worst on this site, but if you plan to improve I suggest finding a way to smooth out the flow of it
-I would like to say something about the characters, but aside from Sappho none of them had any time to shine, not even the MC who at the moment looks quite generic, so I strongly advise working on developing them.
I wish you luck on your story and hope this helps as feedback for your work.
luda305Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
The worldbuilding and general story premise is pretty interesting. But overall it's clunky. It's clunky on a sentence level, where we have either strange word choice or missing words. It's clunky on a paragraph level, where one train of thought does not transition to another. And it's clunky on a story level, as it's kind of just meandering around without much actual plot (notionally, we're following this one guy who reincarnates as a baby, but then we spend several chapters with the adult members of the caravan for no discernable reason). There's also an issue where there's exposition in place to explain a character's actions or the setup for why such-and-such is so-and-so, but the exposition fails to connect the dots and the action or the setup still doesn't make sense in-universe. In short, it's rough and hasn't significantly improved after ten chapters.