From Ash to Flame

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Thirty years ago, the Unity Accord—a galactic pact to unite species—shattered, plunging the stars into chaos. The Krythar, crimson-skinned warlords, seized Aetheris technology, their dreadnoughts enforcing a communist tyranny across systems. The Aetheris, guilt-ridden for nearly annihilating the bioluminescent Luminari, retreated into isolation. The Luminari, cursed by a mind-enslaving plague, became shambling husks, clashing with feral Varkis scavengers.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Particlewave

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Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 1
Views: 3,121

Chapters(30 total)

What readers say about From Ash to Flame

“First of all, I like the sensory details and grammar. It's clear you spent a lot of time revising and writing. The details make it much more clear. That being said, I believe there is too much detail. It's starting make the paragraphs and sentences more wor…”
0ZeroRoyal Road3.5 / 5

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0ZeroRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
First of all, I like the sensory details and grammar. It's clear you spent a lot of time revising and writing. The details make it much more clear. That being said, I believe there is too much detail. It's starting make the paragraphs and sentences more wordy which might lead to boredom, just a suggestion but tone down the details a bit. The overall plot is very interesting too. The worldbuilding is deep and it's obvious you spent a lot of time. Good story so far, just focus on paragraph length. I'll continue reading, keep up the good work!