Mc reincarnates into Peter parker from the MCU before iron man 1 and decides to be the best spiderman there ever will be, but the path he chose led him to be an internet celebrity.

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AshClarke91Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

I initially started this to pass some time but it was actually pretty fun and I enjoyed the small shout outs for crossover characters.
My only issue is probably some grammatical errors and how when multiple characters are talking, the context of who is who gets blurred to the point you have to reread to assign whats spoken by whom before moving on. (simple fix really)
Regardless of any issues it is a great story I will continue following as the character depth is slowly building and the emotional conflict is believable, if dramatised abit.
Thanks for the great read.
KEEP IT COMING!!!! 😁

TsaardenRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

I think it's worth a shot, others might enjoy it. The story line has potential and I was looking forward to where it went.
The Grammer is okay, not top tier but not the worst I've read. I suspect that it's translated to english or english is a second language because some phrasing and word choice feel a little off. An example is someone "lifted" a phone. Context clues lead me to believe the author meant to say picked up the phone. Not a deal breaker, just have to work things out sometimes.
The place the story breaks down for me is the characters and dialogue. The MC comes off as pretty erratic and unlikable to me. He seems cruel to people for no real reason, an example would be the treatment of MJ. Also there is far too much swearing for my tastes. Swearing in real life conversation always just feels different from swearing in a story.
Lastly the romance with a real life person inserted into a fiction feels creepy to me.

Ayden303Royal Road

★★ 2.0

the story is okay, but it is the grammar that is killing the story for me it he doesn't add enough details to the story I think he should re edit the story. but once he re-edited the story, I read it, I don't like giving bad reviews but i don't recommend it until he redo the grammar.

Magicperson1Royal Road

★★ 2.0

I always feel terrible giving bad reviews but this is just plain bad. It's difficult to even tell whether or not the story is even good as the Grammer and formatting is poor and inconsistent. The few character interactions feel rigid and inconsistent and although the core concept felt interesting it just feels forced.

James HovaneeeRoyal Road

★ 0.5

So, let me just start by saying I liked the premise.
A transmigrator in the mcu who becomes a YouTuber? Neat, but then I got to "What the fuck is she doing here?"
And any goodwill I had quickly left. From there, things start to nose dive.
The plot gets messy, the Grammer fucking sucks, the dialog feels wooden, any characterization falls flat, and I was dissapointed the story changed to generic slop.
Now I assume they're going back and fixing things for which I applaud them, but until it's fixed, I refuse to continue.

Friendly neighborhood Youtuber Spider man

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