Freedom Universe

Self-Published

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Description

James was a fat, balding middle-aged programmer, estranged from his family, too smart for his own good and too lazy to truly accomplish anything. Then he heard of Freedom Universe, an actual universe accidently discovered by Olympus Technologies that one could transfer their consciousness to. You could become any race you wanted with access to highly advanced technology and psionic powers. So now he is Be'larien Sil'nathiel, a very powerful member of a very powerful race. And he's never regretted anything more in his life.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Kuryuugami

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 240
Views: 32,136

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

AzairaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A great read so far - well written, great plot, ane easily keeps my interest.
It has the potential to go far, and its many interesting paths available.
Granz TacRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Nice story, very detailed just like published book also keep up good works. i intrested just by read prologue and keep make reader guessing next chapter.
Style: Very easy to read or different betwen talk and other. 5/5 !!
Grammar : no glich so far so 5/5.
Story : umm... nice not self fulling wish but i kinda intrested it direction.
Character : So far is nice i also can fell some emotion.
ALL FULL 5 STAR !!! HAILL !!!!
Yuki KirimoraRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
When is this going to continue? I don't find stuff to read that grabs my attention so much very offten and I was hoping to know when the nexy chapters were goin to release. Lovvee the story!!
overpaladaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is still on the beginning but it is showing what would be a great read ,the characters felt real the universe sounds concise and the grammar is great.
Hoping to see much more chapters of it soon
seckooRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I have to say I really like this story. Even the whole gender-bender part which really makes it interesting to read. Though sometimes the inner conflict that the MC is having is frustrating because we don't know enough of their backstory as to why this is such a huge problem for them.
I know some people are put off by the sexual/gender issues in this story. I, on the other hand, don't think you should listen to the people who are telling you to change your story. I think it is a very interesting and compelling story.
This review is after reading Ch. 7 so I am really interested to see where this goes and can't wait to see how this story develops. Also who cares if things aren't proportionate...they're aliens.
Zen'akuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I generaly don't read that many "buy a new life in another dimension", but this one is just awesome. The rating system for abilities and stuff like that is just womderful in it's complex simplicity.
kaneki_kun21123Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Even Though It's Pretty Early To Say Anything but This novel is so good that it hooked me up in the first chapters .. So If Your Looking For A Man Who Got Luckily Perfect An Hidden Exam And Got Rewarded And Here You Have It . Good Luck For The Novel Cheers !
MattajRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I must say that this story suprised me. I'm usually skipping gender bender stories but this one didn't feel too 'gender-benderly' so I gave it a try. And boy, was I suprised? The story, world and characters are one of the best I have seen during the past couple weeks. They feel real and interesting as well as make you want to read more chapters after each one you finished.
On the other hand I cannot say if I will stay with this story or not but it all probably depends on the author and how much he/she will go into gender bender stuff.
PeppermancerRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This novel involves male on male sex. Dude on dude, guy on guy, gay sex. It is not described in extreme detail, and it's a lot more complicated than that in the book. But hopefully those first few sentences will turn away the less accepting members of RoyalRoadl and we can move on to the book itself, rather than the politics of homophobia and gender fluidity.
So first of all, Kuryuugami, you are absolutely incredible at world building. You have multiple species with differing cultures in a universe with its own laws and languages and its amazing. This is your biggest strength and I recommend you continue building on it. But while I love hearing about the world and the creatures that inhabit it, I'm having a hard time enjoying the characters. Namely Bel. No, not because of their gender fluidity or struggling with their sexuality, but just because I find some of your decisions involving their personality and story to be rather confusing. I feel like I know more about past Bel than current them. Which normaly I would be understanding of, just due to the fact that the majority of these 7 chapters have been descriptions of her 'Life Story' and world building. But because you chose to make this a transmigration story, we need to know more about Bel before they were transfered. Why are these conflicting thoughts on sexuality so ingrained in them? Why are they scared of being gay, what sort of world did they grow up in before migrating. What about them made them a genius on earth, all these things. You have an amazing chance to develop such an interesting story and character progression around this conflict, but without the conflict being more defined, it's difficult to really get into the meat of it and get all the details that are needed to understand it all. The other thing is about their story. Sure, they did well in the military. Sure they did well in school. But how does that influence their supposed strength? Bel has shown that they have abnormally high stats, but wh