Fragile Monster Lord (FanFict)

I tried to write my version of Monster Lord from the story that already made by " Sudar ". The tittle of story are "The Fragile Monster Lord", I really like the idea of story in that story. but i did like to modyfy the story a little to my liking. His story are on Hiatus, so i think he already abandon that story. I am sorry if i offended him by recreating his story.